Rattling Away

She came in. 
She had my undivided attention. 
When she looked I turned away. 
So I sat there, with the pot boiling and lid just rattling away.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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February 20, 2013 at 9:51 PM
Oooh. Tense. I really like this. Awesomely expressed!Always,Laura
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