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Rat

Race on for that cheese, little rodent, don't lose sight of the prize Always use your size To the best advantage, you must live and rise!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/26/2008 7:13:00 AM
This reminds me of the book "Who Moved My Cheese." I like the flow of the words and the message. There are some lessons we can learn from rats, especially about surviving underground from a blast. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 10/21/2008 7:12:00 PM
Cute poem....enjoyable to read! ~ Carrie PS...in reference to the first comment...I don't agree!!
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Date: 10/21/2008 6:33:00 PM
Heh heh Very well penned. I enjoyed. Ghetto
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