Rat

Race on for that cheese, little rodent, don't lose sight of the prize
Always use your size
To the best advantage, you must live and rise!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Spence Sr Avatar
October 26, 2008 at 7:13 AM
This reminds me of the book "Who Moved My Cheese." I like the flow of the words and the message. There are some lessons we can learn from rats, especially about surviving underground from a blast. Great job! ~Joseph
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October 21, 2008 at 7:12 PM
Cute poem....enjoyable to read! ~ Carrie PS...in reference to the first comment...I don't agree!!
Dewalt Avatar
October 21, 2008 at 6:33 PM
Heh heh Very well penned. I enjoyed. Ghetto
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