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Raspberry Jam

Something red, Something sweet, Something i'd wanna eat Something that would help when im feeling down I'd spread it on toast, then take a bite and when im done, I'll spit it up I did this because I do not like it However, I can dream I do. Convince its true No matter how much I dream But reality its just cruel I do not like what I fantasize My tongue rejects But my eyes say otherwise.

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Date: 6/7/2025 7:57:00 PM
Enjoyed the title and feeling of your poem. Great flow, life's not as sweet as it sounds, however we can make it interesting. Very cute. Always ~poet destroyer~
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