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Raspberry Jam

Something red, Something sweet, Something i'd wanna eat Something that would help when im feeling down I'd spread it on toast, then take a bite and when im done, I'll spit it up I did this because I do not like it However, I can dream I do. Convince its true No matter how much I dream But reality its just cruel I do not like what I fantasize My tongue rejects But my eyes say otherwise.

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Danny Derden

Date: 6/22/2025 7:20:00 AM

This poem powerfully captures the frustration of unfulfilled desires and the struggle between idealized hopes and harsh reality. It beautifully illustrates the pain of wanting to love something your true self rejects. Lessons we all need to learn.

Beata Agustin

Date: 6/10/2025 12:59:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/7/2025 7:57:00 PM

Enjoyed the title and feeling of your poem. Great flow, life's not as sweet as it sounds, however we can make it interesting. Very cute. Always ~poet destroyer~