Rare Jewels

Awesome as spring nights,
the pond's silver gleams seemed stars...
I tried to catch them,
thinking they were rare jewels
that the moon gave to lovers.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 5:07 AM
A belated congratulations on your win in ^Rick's "Lets Pass A Tanka Love Note" contest Andrew. Love, Carol
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June 11, 2012 at 8:25 PM
Andrew, congrats on your win. Beautiful imagery! I love the idea of jewels from the moon. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Williams Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 2:21 AM
Andrew congrats on your win..David
Song Avatar
June 10, 2012 at 8:30 PM
Wonderful ideas from your moonlit pond, Andrew...mesmerizing...Congrats on this win in a super competitive contest...Gwendolen
Dietrich Avatar
June 10, 2012 at 8:26 PM
This is a very unique and beautiful idea you did with your entry, Andrew. Sure wish I saw more of you. Congrats on your win.
Cheesman Avatar
May 29, 2012 at 5:16 AM
Andrew .........wow lovely.
Whitehead Avatar
May 29, 2012 at 4:41 AM
Beautiful words
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