Rare Finch

RARE BIRD

Sitting outside my window
a Black-throated Finch is there.
This little bird now is on show
seldom seen, could become rare.

A Black-throated Finch is there,
hoping he'll stay for some time,
seldom seen, could become rare,
pecks at a worm to dine.

Hoping he'll stay for some time,
content to continue grazing.
he pecks at a worm to dine
this little bird is amazing.

Content to continue grazing
each morsel he chooses with care,
this little bird is amazing,
of extinction he's unaware.

Each morsel he chooses with care,
needs protection before decline.
Of extinction he's unaware
his habitat men want to mine.

Needs protection before decline,
this little bird now is on show,
a Black-throated Finch so fine
Sitting outside my window.

Copyright © Vivien Wade  2014
A Pantoum
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Wade Avatar
February 8, 2019 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the comment Jan. I'm still a novice at different forms. Also tried Villanelle and kyrielle and enjoy them also. blessings, Vivien
Allison Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 2:45 AM
what a stunning pantoum I love this challenging form and yours reads so beautifully:-) hugs Jan xx
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