Rare Chair

rare chair there's wear Clare tear she'd pray they may think fray fat cat chair sat saw rat thought snare claw chair mid air got scared so weird rat cared 11/29/2022 'A BRIAN STRAND CHOICE HIKU FOOTLE TANKA CLERIHEW' Poetry Contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/11/2022 7:33:00 PM

love the ending that rat cared. Congrats, Eve, and thanks for your recent nursery rhyme contests.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 12/11/2022 7:58:00 AM

Hahahaha Eve. Nicely done! Congratulations! :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/11/2022 7:46:00 AM

Way to go with this winner in Brian's contest. Congratulations. Sara

Jcb Brul

Date: 12/11/2022 7:35:00 AM

This is so cute. Even little kids will love this! Congratulations.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 12/11/2022 6:14:00 AM

Great footle. Congratulations!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 12/11/2022 6:13:00 AM

Beautiful footle, sir. Congratulations!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/5/2022 3:20:00 AM

Creative ones. Way to go. Reads like a good contender for Brian's contest. Thanks for sharing and for letting me know I placed in your contest. I appreciate the honor. Sara

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/4/2022 6:52:00 PM

Entertaining and creative, Eve. Janice

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/2/2022 10:28:00 AM

Hi Eve my friend, life is so busy and yet so beautiful, but does consume us. I was hospitalized with a Covid variant for a week, came home and it took another month to come right. You create such excellent poetry tackling any topic with immaculate imagination and ease. Very cute write. Blessings and hugs Jennifer. A BLESSED CHRISTMAS to you and your family my friend. Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.