Rare Chair

rare chair
there's wear
Clare tear

she'd pray
they may
think fray

fat cat
chair sat
saw rat
thought snare
claw chair
mid air
got scared
so weird
rat cared

11/29/2022

'A BRIAN STRAND CHOICE HIKU FOOTLE TANKA CLERIHEW' Poetry Contest

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Andrea Dietrich

December 11, 2022 at 7:33 PM

love the ending that rat cared. Congrats, Eve, and thanks for your recent nursery rhyme contests.

Linda Alice Fowler

December 11, 2022 at 7:58 AM

Hahahaha Eve. Nicely done! Congratulations! :)

Sara Kendrick

December 11, 2022 at 7:46 AM

Way to go with this winner in Brian's contest. Congratulations. Sara

JC Brul

December 11, 2022 at 7:35 AM

This is so cute. Even little kids will love this! Congratulations.

Christuraj Alex

December 11, 2022 at 6:14 AM

Great footle. Congratulations!

Christuraj Alex

December 11, 2022 at 6:13 AM

Beautiful footle, sir. Congratulations!

Sara Kendrick

December 5, 2022 at 3:20 AM

Creative ones. Way to go. Reads like a good contender for Brian's contest. Thanks for sharing and for letting me know I placed in your contest. I appreciate the honor. Sara

Janice Canerdy

December 4, 2022 at 6:52 PM

Entertaining and creative, Eve. Janice

Jennifer Proxenos

December 2, 2022 at 10:28 AM

Hi Eve my friend, life is so busy and yet so beautiful, but does consume us. I was hospitalized with a Covid variant for a week, came home and it took another month to come right. You create such excellent poetry tackling any topic with immaculate imagination and ease. Very cute write. Blessings and hugs Jennifer. A BLESSED CHRISTMAS to you and your family my friend. Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.