Rare

Living my life,
No hope by my side.
No faith in my heart.
All fears are alive.

Killing my spirit,
You keep going on.
I don't wanna hear it.
I just gotta be strong.

But i lost all strength.
in this cold, dark war.
Although i call your name,
You just ignore.

i need you now more than ever,
But your not there.
My lifes gone forever.
And my feelings, are rare.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
May 13, 2012 at 5:42 AM
This is good Danielle I am not sure it is a limmerick if you don't mind me saying but I have enjoyep it immensly xx
Brown Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 6:59 AM
This is a great way to start my morning reading poetry. I am glad your poetry was among the poetry I have the pleasure to read today. Wishing you a weekend full of love and inspiration Danielle. Love, Carol
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