Rapuzel

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Author's Notes: Co-Authored this "Rapunzel" free verse poem with Liam McDaid on October 13, 2014.

(Gary Bateman, October 19, 2014) (Free Verse poetic format)

Categories: allegory, desire, devotion, emotions, feelings, love, and metaphor.

Rapunzel rolling down your barriers dazzling jewels opening sparkling chambers one begins climbing each curling warm feeling touching each emotion sweetly one step a little closer in kissing each and every memory entering sharing these thoughts cherishing every last minute each minute special each second heavenly Rapunzel heart of a rose your lips sweet blushing silk satin petals soft lips blushing as you my love entranced entering your one tower letting your hair down smiling the path we walk heading forward none of us really have a clue but each strand holding unto a perfect dream Rapunzel princess of my dreams thoughts and love intertwined walking hand in hand now both blessed with passion both blessed with emotion both blessed with true love walking together unafraid talking caressing holding kissing arms locked embracing passion a perfect dream forever Liam McDaid and Gary Bateman, Free Verse Collaboration, October 13, 2014

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/20/2014 10:05:00 AM

smiling really love how this turned out pal

Gary Bateman
Date: 10/21/2014 1:58:00 PM

Me Too Liam . . . It's truly a grand one Mate. Cheers, Gary