Kim Rodrigues Poet Free verse

Rapunzels Ribbon

RAPUNZEL’S RIBBON

a Rare prince
climbs hAir gladly,
kicks uP braids.
Untied ribbon-rope
steers a reNegade’s heart.
 his Zealous mission -
win a princEss,
Lighten her life.
Serendipity brought him
her Rosy cheeks.
he must Imbibe
her ribBoned streaks.
Bold and courageous, 
dOwn they go,
cutting Netherworld ties.

3/27/2019
Ribbon Poetry Contest
Sponsor - Line Gauthier

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Caren Krutsinger April 4, 2019 at 4:39 PM I love the way you made this also a "RAPUNZEL" poem with the capital letters, like we, the readers, were also climbing down the hair. That took some thinking! Kim Rodrigues April 4, 2019 at 6:23 PM Thanks for noticing, Caren :)

Panagiota Romios April 2, 2019 at 12:18 AM Quite Interesting, Kim. Hugs,I Panagiota. Kim Rodrigues April 2, 2019 at 6:42 AM Thank you, Panagiota!

Connie Marcum Wong April 1, 2019 at 1:02 PM I have always loved the story of Rapunzel Kim. I wished for a daughter with long golden hair and my wish was granted. People used marvel at her hair everywhere we went. I so enjoyed this piece. I hope it places high! P.S. I have been ill with bronchitis and missed so much. : ) xxoo Kim Rodrigues April 1, 2019 at 5:50 PM So sorry! Glad you are better, sweet friend!

Jennifer Proxenos April 1, 2019 at 12:14 PM This is certainly a win Kim - such an imaginative climb up to sheer heights of love! Poetry hugs, Jenny. Kim Rodrigues April 1, 2019 at 5:50 PM Thank you, Jennifer!

Arturo Michael March 31, 2019 at 10:56 AM The hAir of love...saved the day...Creative imagination... Kim Rodrigues March 31, 2019 at 3:10 PM Thank you, Arturo :)