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Rapunzels Ribbon

RAPUNZEL’S RIBBON a Rare prince climbs hAir gladly, kicks uP braids. Untied ribbon-rope steers a reNegade’s heart. his Zealous mission - win a princEss, Lighten her life. Serendipity brought him her Rosy cheeks. he must Imbibe her ribBoned streaks. Bold and courageous, dOwn they go, cutting Netherworld ties. 3/27/2019 Ribbon Poetry Contest Sponsor - Line Gauthier

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/4/2019 4:39:00 PM

I love the way you made this also a "RAPUNZEL" poem with the capital letters, like we, the readers, were also climbing down the hair. That took some thinking!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/4/2019 6:23:00 PM

Thanks for noticing, Caren :)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 4/2/2019 12:18:00 AM

Quite Interesting, Kim. Hugs,I Panagiota.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/2/2019 6:42:00 AM

Thank you, Panagiota!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/1/2019 1:02:00 PM

I have always loved the story of Rapunzel Kim. I wished for a daughter with long golden hair and my wish was granted. People used marvel at her hair everywhere we went. I so enjoyed this piece. I hope it places high! P.S. I have been ill with bronchitis and missed so much. : ) xxoo

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/1/2019 5:50:00 PM

So sorry! Glad you are better, sweet friend!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/1/2019 12:14:00 PM

This is certainly a win Kim - such an imaginative climb up to sheer heights of love! Poetry hugs, Jenny.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/1/2019 5:50:00 PM

Thank you, Jennifer!

Arturo Michael

Date: 3/31/2019 10:56:00 AM

The hAir of love...saved the day...Creative imagination...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/31/2019 3:10:00 PM

Thank you, Arturo :)