Rapunzel's Double Life

RAPUNZELS' DOUBLE LIFE - ONCE UPON A TIME

Not so long ago
A housewife named Rapunzel
Lived in a modest bungalow
A white picket fence contained it
Flowers filled beautiful garden beds
A swinging seat Rapunzel would sit
Golden ringlets tied upon her head
Daily she'd greet the postman
And wave as the buses passed by
She's sit and dream of a life beyond
Questioning herself as to why?
Why is it  I don't have glamour
Not even glitz or fame?
Why is it my life seems dull
With everyday just the same?
Wanting to feel some excitement
A reason to dress up real nice
Rapunzel took to the city lights
And soon was living a double life
Rapunzel became known as a socialite
Golden ringlets hung down low
Mixing with all the rich and famous
Glitz and glamour was all the go
But then on one fateful day
Rapunzels' hubby caught her out
Her photo was in the social pages
He demanded "What's this all about?"
Rapunzel she was speachless
Thinking of what to say
"Oh Arthur darling that's not me
That's my sister Madeline May"
"Madeline May is in town for a month
I'm sure I mentioned it to you
She'll be busy mixing with the wealthy
Getting to know who's who"
Arthur replied "I must of forgot"
And with that Rapunzel sighed
She'd have to be much more careful
Arthur couldn't find out she'd lied
This double life Rapunzel lived
It filled her with such delight
Life had a sense of pure excitement
Being just a housewife didn't seem right
For years Rapunzel continued
Socialising with only the best
Presuming Arthur had no clue
She had no reason to confess
After a long and eventful day
Rapunzel discovered Arthur had gone
Finding a note it simply said
'You've lived a double life too long!'

04/02/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/6/2016 6:20:00 PM
Thank you everyone for such lovely comments! And Thank you Laura Loo for the placement in your competition. It's all very encouraging.
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Date: 2/6/2016 4:25:00 PM
Susan, Congratulations on your wonderful "Once Upon A Time Win!!!" Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/6/2016 11:58:00 AM
Susan, congrats on your placement and thank you for being apart of my contest *smiles* -luloo
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Date: 2/6/2016 11:20:00 AM
lovely storytelling Susan congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/4/2016 11:34:00 PM
Susan,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/4/2016 7:23:00 PM
Susan, I will continue to enjoy and support your poems if you continue with this site. You are going to like it here. I'm ready to read more of your poems. I don't post much. However, I have two new poems. I will click on your name, and check if you have another poem. HUGS. LINDA
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Date: 2/4/2016 7:12:00 PM
by the way, this is awesome, good luck in the contest. LINDA
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Date: 2/4/2016 7:11:00 PM
Hi Susan, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 2/4/2016 7:19:00 PM
Thank you, I hope you will continue to enjoy my poems in the near future.
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Date: 2/4/2016 7:18:00 PM
Thank you, I hope you will continue to enjoy my poems in the near future.
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