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Rapunzel In Brooklyn

Let us relate to the dark angel as he spins his web around us Rapunzel - let down thy hair Let us taste the sunset in Brooklyn Rapunzel let down thy hair There are fires burning within Rapunzel - let down they hair We love the sky with it's firey glow Rapunzel - let down thy hair Another Summer Evening Rapunzel - let down thy hair Peace & Joy within Rapunzel - let down thy hair Let the lights from the sky - move us like flowing water Rapunzel - let down thy hair Another poetry reading at "The Green Pavillion" Rapunzel let down thy hair

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Date: 5/6/2013 6:46:00 AM
Your poem is full of color and delightful expectations. Great write, Matthew... David
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Date: 5/5/2013 9:19:00 AM
- Matthew, it's gorgeous!! - Thank you for visiting my poem much appreciated your visit. - Have a enjoyable Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/4/2013 8:11:00 PM
Good evening Matt, i love the bright sunny look in Brooklyn. I love the repetition of "Rapunzel - let down thy hair". a very fine day. and imagery upon the sky... love the comparison... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 5/4/2013 5:08:00 PM
Interesting work that you have penned..I remember this Fable from old...Thanks for stopping by my Indigo Bunting..Sara
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Date: 5/2/2013 11:08:00 AM
your love of the city always shines forth. Love this metaphor!
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