Matthew Anish Poet Blank verse

Rapunzel In Brooklyn

Let us relate to the dark angel 
   as he spins his web around us
Rapunzel - let down thy hair 
Let us taste the sunset in Brooklyn
Rapunzel let down thy hair 
There are fires burning within 
Rapunzel - let down they hair 
We love the sky with it's firey glow 
Rapunzel - let down thy hair 
Another Summer Evening 
Rapunzel - let down thy hair 
Peace & Joy within
Rapunzel - let down thy hair 
Let the lights from the sky - move us like flowing water 
Rapunzel - let down thy hair 
Another poetry reading at "The Green Pavillion"
Rapunzel let down thy hair

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David De La Croes May 6, 2013 at 6:46 AM Your poem is full of color and delightful expectations. Great write, Matthew... David

Anne-Lise Andresen May 5, 2013 at 9:19 AM - Matthew, it's gorgeous!! - Thank you for visiting my poem much appreciated your visit. - Have a enjoyable Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A May 4, 2013 at 8:11 PM Good evening Matt, i love the bright sunny look in Brooklyn. I love the repetition of "Rapunzel - let down thy hair". a very fine day. and imagery upon the sky... love the comparison... xox~ LINDA

Sara Kendrick May 4, 2013 at 5:08 PM Interesting work that you have penned..I remember this Fable from old...Thanks for stopping by my Indigo Bunting..Sara

Andrea Dietrich May 2, 2013 at 11:08 AM your love of the city always shines forth. Love this metaphor!