Cynthia Jones Poet Rhyme

Rapunzel -Fractured Rhyme-

Rapunzel, Rapunzel
please shave off your hair, 
I keep tripping on it
over here and way over there.

It's getting too long
why is it you can't see?
One of these days soon
it will be the death of me.

Copyright © Cynthia Jones
Jan.11/2015

Just something I came up with, while watching some of the movie "Tangled."

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David Fisher January 12, 2015 at 8:18 PM This is creative, Cynthia. A bad hair day for everyone. Cynthia Jones March 23, 2015 at 1:47 PM Just think I didn't know exactly what happened in the movie (after I wrote this), what really happened, until I watched the entire movie later on that night when it repeated. Thank you so very much for stopping by to have a read and leave a comment David. I truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia

Dorian Petersen Potter January 12, 2015 at 10:53 AM Very nice verse Cynthia! Truly enjoyed dear friend .A 7 from me! Have a nice day! :) Love and hugs! xxoxoxx D.^0^ Cynthia Jones March 23, 2015 at 1:16 PM :O) Hey there Dorian. Thank you so very much for stopping by have a read, leave a comment and for the rating. I truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia