Rapturous

 Birds
Soaring
Swooping low
Sailing on air
Wings

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Date: 12/15/2022 7:20:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this one today that is featured on Home Page. I can see the scene. Thanks for sharing. Sara
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Date: 2/9/2015 9:05:00 AM
Shane, I think this poem is so pretty visually, I love to watch the birds soaring, swooping and sailing also, well done and thanks for your visit to my poem 'lamenting mother' and my grief will be until I take my last breath, of this, I know ~~
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Shane Cooper
Date: 2/9/2015 11:24:00 AM
Thank you for reading my work. Your poetry is so beautiful yet so heart breakingly sad and I know it is a reflection of your heart and soul, your words could not come from anywhere else. Take care my friend. Love Shane xxx
Date: 1/17/2015 1:30:00 PM
Delightful strong imagery Shane:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Shane Cooper
Date: 1/18/2015 4:49:00 AM
I love watching birds riding thermals they appear to just float effortlessly. Thanks for reading Jan. Love Shane
Date: 1/16/2015 4:26:00 PM
Thanks again Mikki for dropping in to read. I always think of eagles when i hear or write the word soar. So majestic , So effortlessly moving through the sky, truely beautiful; but as in most things beautiful also perilous. Love Shane xxx
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Date: 1/16/2015 9:41:00 AM
Oh, I love birds, Shane! I'm sure they must cross the paths of angels as they soar. Enjoying this "RAPTUROUS"! Happy tidings to you! Mikki
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