Rapturous

 Birds
Soaring
Swooping low
Sailing on air
Wings

beautybirdlanterne

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Sara Kendrick

December 15, 2022 at 7:20 AM

I enjoyed reading this one today that is featured on Home Page. I can see the scene. Thanks for sharing. Sara

Constance La France

February 9, 2015 at 9:05 AM

Shane, I think this poem is so pretty visually, I love to watch the birds soaring, swooping and sailing also, well done and thanks for your visit to my poem 'lamenting mother' and my grief will be until I take my last breath, of this, I know ~~

Shane Cooper

February 9, 2015 at 11:24 AM

Thank you for reading my work. Your poetry is so beautiful yet so heart breakingly sad and I know it is a reflection of your heart and soul, your words could not come from anywhere else. Take care my friend. Love Shane xxx

Jan Allison

January 17, 2015 at 1:30 PM

Delightful strong imagery Shane:-) hugs Jan xxx

Shane Cooper

January 18, 2015 at 4:49 AM

I love watching birds riding thermals they appear to just float effortlessly. Thanks for reading Jan. Love Shane

Shane Cooper

January 16, 2015 at 4:26 PM

Thanks again Mikki for dropping in to read. I always think of eagles when i hear or write the word soar. So majestic , So effortlessly moving through the sky, truely beautiful; but as in most things beautiful also perilous. Love Shane xxx