Rapture

I see you in the starlight,
I hear you in the breeze,
your face is with me everywhere,
I fall down on my knees.

I pray with all my heart and soul
that you'll be by my side, 
forever 'til the end of time,
as constant as the tide.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Nicholsen Avatar
December 30, 2023 at 12:15 PM
Lovely write I enjoyed reading your work.
Clark Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 7:02 AM
Love's longing can be painful. A yearning deep within, unfathomable yet always hopeful. A short yet sweet scented poem. Thanks Keith.
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 3, 2018 at 1:42 PM
Hello Keith Bickerstaffe, so nice to meet you. This poem is romantic to me. To be read to your girlfriend or wife. have a nice day my friend.
Dietrich Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 12:51 AM
So beautiful.
Maverick Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 3:01 PM
How well this runs Keith, also rich in meaning (well done)
Emu Avatar
November 7, 2016 at 2:27 PM
Lovely poem Keith. Short but says a lot. Regards, Craig
Allison Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 4:38 PM
oh how romantic Keith:-) the flow of the lines is so so beautiful:-) hugs Jan xx7
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