Rapture

I see you in the starlight,
   I hear you in the breeze,
your face is with me everywhere,
   I fall down on my knees

and pray with all my heart and soul
   that you'll be by my side 
forever till the end of time,
   as constant as the tide.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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November 19, 2008 at 4:35 PM
I love this poem. It is beautiful in structure and sentiment. To love with all that you are is beautiful. So glad you had the chance to read "My Words" . It's the 2nd I've written in a long time and the other was very depressing. I'm really beginning to enjoy writing again. Be well and bless you, Robin
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