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Rapture

I see you in the starlight, I hear you in the breeze, your face is with me everywhere, I fall down on my knees. I pray with all my heart and soul that you'll be by my side, forever 'til the end of time, as constant as the tide.

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Justin Bordner

Date: 7/28/2012 11:42:00 AM

Honesty rewarded by the pain of Love - I'm sure this work is cherrished - J.A.B. %

Debbie Duncan

Date: 7/12/2012 2:33:00 AM

I truly love this one ;}

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/5/2012 9:03:00 PM

oh, and the "blank verse" one. Also VERY nice.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/5/2012 9:02:00 PM

after your sonnet this is my second favorite of the day. Love the rhythmic flow and romance of it.

Kerry Singleton

Date: 7/5/2012 6:42:00 PM

You have bought tears keith, love this can relate to it in many ways... I have had so much loss in my life in life & death...

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/5/2012 12:48:00 PM

This is a truly wondrous write Kieth! I was impressed with the awesome message you have portrayed here! It was very inspirational, I have some ideas for a couple of poems of my own to write now! Great Work!!