Rapture

...to Juvie

I see you in the starlight,
I hear you in the breeze,
your face is with me everywhere,
I fall down on my knees

and pray with all my heart and soul
that you'll be by my side, 
forever 'til the end of time,
as constant as the tide.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Dalby Avatar
June 9, 2009 at 2:28 AM
Great writing. From the heart. JD http://readmypoetrynow.blogspot.com/
Adeite Avatar
June 8, 2009 at 8:50 AM
Interesting piece with lovely flow of words, you are such a talented poet. Keep writing. great you! Adeleke
Guzzi Avatar
June 8, 2009 at 6:28 AM
ahhhhh love..I'm glad for you! Light & Love
Richards Avatar
June 8, 2009 at 6:07 AM
What sweet devotion to the one you love....lucky lady! :)
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