Edward Ibeh Poet Rictameter

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Rapture

Rapture

how it sweeps me

along much like a stream

when you come home to me, at last

Pure bliss, when you throw me a flirty eye!

Sweet nothings whispered in my ear,

or the three magic words

makes me smile in...

Rapture


STRAND PICK 6,any theme,any form Contest (Winner: 1st Place)
Sponsored by Brian Strand
Date written and submitted: 04/08/2020

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Connie Marcum Wong April 11, 2020 at 12:39 AM Congratulations on your wonderful First Placement Edward! xxoo Edward Ibeh April 11, 2020 at 2:07 PM Thank you so much, Connie:-)

Paula Goldsmith April 10, 2020 at 12:30 PM A great win, enjoy it. Have a wonderful day, weekend and Blessed Easter............... Edward Ibeh April 10, 2020 at 3:49 PM Thank you so much, Paula:-) Have a wonderful day as Easter as well!

John Watt April 9, 2020 at 11:17 PM You sound like a very lucky man, Edward. Nicely shaped, nicely written. Congrats on your #1! Edward Ibeh April 10, 2020 at 6:24 AM I am, John:-) I'm married to a good woman! Thanks for the congrats and visit, my friend!

Darlene De Beaulieu April 8, 2020 at 12:44 PM Hello Edward, this does sound like a romance poem. It is beautifully created. Enjoy your day my friend. Be safe. Darlene De Beaulieu April 9, 2020 at 7:28 AM hello Edward, I enjoyed this poem. You stay safe. Enjoy your day my friend. Edward Ibeh April 8, 2020 at 1:56 PM Thank you so much for your continued support and visit, Darlene:-) You stay safe out there, too!