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Rapture

Rapture

how it sweeps me

along much like a stream

when you come home to me, at last

Pure bliss, when you throw me a flirty eye!

Sweet nothings whispered in my ear,

or the three magic words

makes me smile in...

Rapture


STRAND PICK 6,any theme,any form Contest (Winner: 1st Place)
Sponsored by Brian Strand
Date written and submitted: 04/08/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 4/11/2020 12:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful First Placement Edward! xxoo
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/11/2020 2:07:00 PM
Thank you so much, Connie:-)
Date: 4/10/2020 12:30:00 PM
A great win, enjoy it. Have a wonderful day, weekend and Blessed Easter...............
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/10/2020 3:49:00 PM
Thank you so much, Paula:-) Have a wonderful day as Easter as well!
Date: 4/9/2020 11:17:00 PM
You sound like a very lucky man, Edward. Nicely shaped, nicely written. Congrats on your #1!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/10/2020 6:24:00 AM
I am, John:-) I'm married to a good woman! Thanks for the congrats and visit, my friend!
Date: 4/8/2020 12:44:00 PM
Hello Edward, this does sound like a romance poem. It is beautifully created. Enjoy your day my friend. Be safe.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/9/2020 7:28:00 AM
hello Edward, I enjoyed this poem. You stay safe. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/8/2020 1:56:00 PM
Thank you so much for your continued support and visit, Darlene:-) You stay safe out there, too!
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