Rapid Thoughts

Like the way her long brown hair flows

To the way her eyes shine

I am captivated and can't turn away

From the way she looks early in the morning 

To the way she looks when she is falling asleep late at night

I am stunned 

My hands get all shaky, my face gets all red, my throat gets all dry

And the words I am trying to say won't come out

I get all tongue tied and I just can't find the right way to say

I love you 



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Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 6/12/2016 9:42:00 PM
this is very good. Catherine. enjoyed. LINDA
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Date: 6/10/2016 11:08:00 PM
such a sweet poem, Catherine...skat
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