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The fact is you rhyme 
like a flatulent behind
and that’s me kind
you’re a waste of time 
and time isn’t indication you climb 
stuck same place is basically decline

So it’s something you got in to
but it’s not what all do
many have a little clue
others listen to you

cus unlike you they ain’t ignorant 
don't believe they know every stunt
like you do in an instant 
furthest back far from front

I think this your only way too shine
but you over complicate the rhymes 
with the image of a fake fool
singing songs unrelatable 
about experience you aint been through
speak of ways that ain’t in you 

Talk of being true
who you
acting red when mister blue
smoking on the green zoot 
hello delude a yellow belly you
for years a career no one hears
a know-it-all without a clue
couldn't find a flow looking at water in the ocean
face it you're hopeless you're no one
dopey desperate and groping
a legless antelope anti-sloping 
a deadweight wearing jokes thin

Ha ha as the years go by 
other settle for a normal life
they had more talent and are more wise 
but of course the size of the competition demise 
so you think you’re one of the better guys 
though not heard by ears or seen by eyes
sending out signals don't reach satellites
your albums and singles never satisfy

your gift was a throw away couldn’t sell 
maybe you should go into your shell 
and go away 
cus the telephone ain’t gonna ring 
you won’t live the dream and know what it bring 
you can try from every angle 
but you are up against guitars dinging a triangle

It’s time to unplug the mic and abandon the band 
cus you a man they don’t demand 
quit the hobby you call a job 
get a job and shut up your gob
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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