Rant Impromptu

right from the start
you told me you
weren't going

to be but not
believing
you're

going to be
gone all
night

long now i
long for
thee

miles and 
Miles
Davis

plays for you
minimalistic
jazz blues

listen to my
heart beat
and keep

the groove
sell it on
You

Tube but still
can't reach
you even

with a video
almost
p**no

graphically
just me
seen

dancing to 
a movie
of you

oh how you
move
me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Lamoureux Avatar
August 6, 2019 at 2:03 PM
The Miles Davis one is my favourite one.
Mchattie Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 8:28 PM
Ah. The dance of love. Have a great day my friend.
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