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Ransom Note Style Poem

Embarrassed faces don’t forgive. Sinking into a bloody death, Show real love next time and Start feeling the open passion. Stop the natural fear and, Sacrifice the stress.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/8/2011 10:35:00 PM
Brilliant first line and then it flows like a river of tears. Check out my "another setting sun unloved".
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Date: 5/28/2011 4:10:00 PM
i really like this poem, keep it up :)
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Date: 5/24/2011 1:33:00 PM
I apologize... I commented on the wrong poem.... I do love the title of this poem...and the consonance at the start of each line
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Date: 5/24/2011 1:31:00 PM
I love the essence of nature in the first three stanzas.... great images
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Date: 5/24/2011 4:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Alora
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Date: 5/23/2011 4:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Alora. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/4/2011 6:44:00 AM
wow... this ties so many raw emotions into one another
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