Lily Mayfield Poet Free verse

Ransom Note Style Poem

Embarrassed faces don’t forgive.
Sinking into a bloody death,
Show real love next time and
Start feeling the open passion.
Stop the natural fear and,
Sacrifice the stress.

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Michael Smith December 8, 2011 at 10:35 PM Brilliant first line and then it flows like a river of tears. Check out my "another setting sun unloved".

Lexus Gabriele May 28, 2011 at 4:10 PM i really like this poem, keep it up :)

Melissa Mesch May 24, 2011 at 1:33 PM I apologize... I commented on the wrong poem.... I do love the title of this poem...and the consonance at the start of each line

Melissa Mesch May 24, 2011 at 1:31 PM I love the essence of nature in the first three stanzas.... great images

Dr.Ram Mehta May 24, 2011 at 4:16 AM Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Alora

Carol Sunshine Brown May 23, 2011 at 4:47 AM Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Alora. Love, Carol

Manouchka Doreus May 4, 2011 at 6:44 AM wow... this ties so many raw emotions into one another