Michael Tor Poet Haiku

Randomling Snowflakes

Snowflakes slowly parachuting together
                                     In the still of the night
                               On mother nature's military invasion



Michael Tor 8/28/2015

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Kim Rodrigues September 26, 2022 at 11:55 AM Oh I love this!!

Andrea Dietrich March 13, 2016 at 7:50 PM This is SO cool. had to go way back to earlier poems of yours because I have seen all your newer ones.

James Inman September 16, 2015 at 11:04 AM Nice visual. Michael Tor September 22, 2015 at 6:13 PM Thank you James

Suzanne Delaney September 12, 2015 at 2:22 PM This is wonderful. They do float down like parachutes. Great imagery, SuZ Michael Tor September 22, 2015 at 6:13 PM Thank you Suzanne for your nice comments.

Ralph Sergi September 9, 2015 at 3:08 PM Great metaphoric poem, Michael! Michael Tor September 10, 2015 at 11:05 PM Thank you so much Ralph.

Balveen Cheema September 9, 2015 at 11:37 AM The mere thought of snowflakes parachuting is amazing! Congrats, Michael! Michael Tor September 10, 2015 at 12:41 AM Thank you so much Balveen for your observation.

Eve Roper September 9, 2015 at 9:55 AM I love the image that you created congratulations on your win hugs Eve Michael Tor September 9, 2015 at 10:59 AM Thank you Eve.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 9, 2015 at 1:40 AM Very wonderful write Michael n a superb win! Big congrats! Michael Tor September 9, 2015 at 11:00 AM Thank you Dr Upma

Mary Rotman September 8, 2015 at 11:21 PM Michael, I have some feedback for you on your winning randomling. If you'd like it, please let me know how i can get ahold of you. Michael Tor September 9, 2015 at 11:01 AM OK Mary. I have to completely register.

Skat A September 8, 2015 at 1:37 AM Wonderful Michael Tor September 9, 2015 at 11:01 AM Thank you Skat

Constance La France August 30, 2015 at 7:04 PM Michael, very nice for the contest and thanks for visiting my poem ~~ Michael Tor August 31, 2015 at 7:31 AM Thank you for your sweet comment.

Michael Tor August 30, 2015 at 6:31 AM Thank you Sir. I appreciate your thoughtful words.

Demetrios Trifiatis August 30, 2015 at 5:32 AM Majestic image! A seven, dear Michael! Michael Tor August 30, 2015 at 8:10 PM Thank you Demetrios.