Random Thoughts Hs

little high with drinks
the mind spins with delusions
sees many visions

two headed shadows
from two adjacent lamp posts
lose destinations

three deer on the trail
show their grace and elegance
quickly disappear

migratory geese
settle over fields in night
eagles are asleep

my visions are bit clear now
its time to  move on for now

May.8.2023 
Haiku Sonnet Poetry Contest Sponsor- Joanna Daniel

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Date: 6/13/2023 3:17:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the Haiku/Sonnet contest, Jay - hugs
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Date: 6/13/2023 1:45:00 AM
Good writing, Jay, though not completely about nature:)
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Date: 5/9/2023 8:11:00 AM
Wonderful extended haiku. Very well-written somnambulatory imagery while a little high. I was wondering if this is the chosen title and what "hs" means. Perhaps "hora somni". If the haiku is to be connected, is the fourth the final cap to your poem? I would like to hear more of your double vision on the 1st. I think yours pass the mustard with eagle's wings.
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Date: 5/8/2023 8:14:00 PM
Lovely set of haikus! Your first trial has shown that you can be a master in this. All the best dear poet friend.
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