Random Thoughts *7* a Rondelet

*Rondelet* Rhyme scheme AbAabbA


                                                                Happy days!
                                                       Better than days I'm blue
                                                                Happy days!
                                                       I have a smile on my face
                                                          As a friend I am true
                                                      As an amateur poet I grew
                                                                Happy days!


Jared Pickett	
9/7/09
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Pickett Avatar
December 9, 2009 at 7:11 AM
Not bad....Dad
Freeman Avatar
September 11, 2009 at 8:55 PM
Excellent, thoughts, here Jared, happy and true, Sincerely Moses
Moreno Avatar
September 8, 2009 at 1:39 AM
Nice form and work. I liked the 6th line...Raul
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