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Random Thoughts 46 the Pleiades

Hurricane

Harsh winds 
Heave cars and 
Hinder paradise
Homes.
Heavy, flooding rain,
Hammering
Hail shreds, hysteria explodes..


Jared Pickett
4/23/2010
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Doris Culverhouse

May 3, 2010 at 6:31 AM

not a good one to read on this stormy day-- now I am looking over my shoulder!!LOL

Charmaine Chircop

April 25, 2010 at 9:24 AM

Is there really a Hurricaine where you live?I doubt it..this sounds like an emotional Hurricaine,,I never had a hurricaine in my Country..Emotional ones i had plenty:).Powerful...Poem...CharmA

Andrea Dietrich

April 24, 2010 at 8:57 PM

well, you should know if you are in Florida!! Have you been actually in one? thanks for the blog comment! Luv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

April 24, 2010 at 8:31 AM

Awesome use of alliteration to describe the power and destruction of hurricanes, Jared. The hurricane season is fast approaching, so this is timely as well. Very nice! Love, Carolyn

Doris Culverhouse

April 23, 2010 at 6:28 PM

have you had a hurricane? Hope you are well!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 23, 2010 at 12:52 PM

Interesting thoughts on the destruction of Mother Nature... its almost like a really bad romantic luv affair.. but I won't go there ..OK? its all good now so enough said..luv your blog today and good luck to your Broncos but only if u cheer for my Giants..deal? luv.. "Sweetheart"

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