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Random Thoughts 44 Seduction

Smooth sillabub blended well Enchanting senses, advances, Dances of romance enhanced>> your now Under my hypnotic trance. Charm, incense, this well Thought out caper. Intrigued by your mystique, Over-joyed, I stand oblique.>> our love Nexus is now complete. Jared Pickett 2/27/2010 Asavvy1

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Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 3/1/2010 7:34:00 AM

Hot Hot! Again. I can see I shall be returning to read your fantastic work of musing often! Kindest thoughts and wishes, Anna-Marie.

Marty Owens

Date: 2/28/2010 5:55:00 PM

Cool seduction!!! Enjoyed...Marty

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/28/2010 5:15:00 PM

Like lines four and five . Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/27/2010 3:11:00 PM

good one, sensuous keep flowing with creativity and encouragement. You must have been working the past couple of days.

Robb A. Kopp

Date: 2/27/2010 3:10:00 PM

Another darkly humerous poem.Keep em' flowin

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/27/2010 12:54:00 PM

U have totally made my afternoon worthwhile with your comment on Wedded Bliss... I just wrote it for the new contest ..sponsor said they wanted FUNNY... u just confirmed.... it is.... by the way.. I luv your response in poetic verse .. fell off my leather chair laughing ... better than looking at the snow and crying... right? u lovable character u... funny bone sufficiently ticked thankxxx to u.. my sexy friend...luv.. "Sweetheart"

Simone Segal

Date: 2/27/2010 11:19:00 AM

Look into my eye's look into my eye's, don't look around the eye's!!LOL, I don't know weather you know this joke but it's funny, but not as smooth and romantic as this lovely poem! love Simone

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/27/2010 11:16:00 AM

This is lovely (see your soup mail) Thank you for your kind words for "My World".

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/27/2010 11:08:00 AM

An inviting seduction ..bravo Lone Wolf .. short and sweet and right to the point.. exactly my style too... saw your comment to Charma.. thankxxx appreciate the accent on me for being an inspiration to u.. however.. ahha ahha ... don't know if I like being second..hahaha.... smile now.. that sexy smile u have... luv.."Sweetheart" New Blog today on soup woes...check it out.... please ...

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/27/2010 10:35:00 AM

Your romantic words could put a woman into a "hypnotic trance" so easily, Jared. Nice work! Love, Carolyn

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/27/2010 10:26:00 AM

Ow this is SEDUCTION,,Jared,and hey i wrote a dedication to all my friends here..you are one of them too,so read it if you want:),You were always a support to me......Hope im to you too...Charma