Random Thoughts *44* Seduction

Smooth sillabub blended well 
Enchanting senses, advances,
Dances of romance enhanced>> your now
Under my hypnotic trance.
Charm, incense, this well 
Thought out caper.  
Intrigued by your mystique,
Over-joyed, I stand oblique.>> our love
Nexus is now complete.


Jared Pickett
2/27/2010
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/1/2010 7:34:00 AM
Hot Hot! Again. I can see I shall be returning to read your fantastic work of musing often! Kindest thoughts and wishes, Anna-Marie.
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Date: 2/28/2010 5:55:00 PM
Cool seduction!!! Enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 2/28/2010 5:15:00 PM
Like lines four and five . Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 2/27/2010 3:11:00 PM
good one, sensuous keep flowing with creativity and encouragement. You must have been working the past couple of days.
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Date: 2/27/2010 3:10:00 PM
Another darkly humerous poem.Keep em' flowin
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Date: 2/27/2010 12:54:00 PM
U have totally made my afternoon worthwhile with your comment on Wedded Bliss... I just wrote it for the new contest ..sponsor said they wanted FUNNY... u just confirmed.... it is.... by the way.. I luv your response in poetic verse .. fell off my leather chair laughing ... better than looking at the snow and crying... right? u lovable character u... funny bone sufficiently ticked thankxxx to u.. my sexy friend...luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 2/27/2010 11:19:00 AM
Look into my eye's look into my eye's, don't look around the eye's!!LOL, I don't know weather you know this joke but it's funny, but not as smooth and romantic as this lovely poem! love Simone
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Date: 2/27/2010 11:16:00 AM
This is lovely (see your soup mail) Thank you for your kind words for "My World".
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Date: 2/27/2010 11:08:00 AM
An inviting seduction ..bravo Lone Wolf .. short and sweet and right to the point.. exactly my style too... saw your comment to Charma.. thankxxx appreciate the accent on me for being an inspiration to u.. however.. ahha ahha ... don't know if I like being second..hahaha.... smile now.. that sexy smile u have... luv.."Sweetheart" New Blog today on soup woes...check it out.... please ...
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Date: 2/27/2010 10:35:00 AM
Your romantic words could put a woman into a "hypnotic trance" so easily, Jared. Nice work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/27/2010 10:26:00 AM
Ow this is SEDUCTION,,Jared,and hey i wrote a dedication to all my friends here..you are one of them too,so read it if you want:),You were always a support to me......Hope im to you too...Charma
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