Jared Pickett Poet I do not know?

Random Thoughts *40* Mirrored Refrain

--Mirrored Refrain--
--xaBA xbAB xaBA xbAB xaBA xbAB--
--Secret Affair--

Emotionally drained, depression rains,
with her this stress is freed.
Must we keep us on the down-low,
a secret affair that will never concede?

Love struck, stuck, laying embraced,
she runs her fingers through my Afro. 
A secret affair that will never concede,
must we keep us on the down-low?

A freak, unique , got her sweating my technique.
Weak, as I gently massage her feet.
Must we keep us on the down-low,
a secret affair that will never concede?

I'll help her undress, caress with finesse,
I'm under the spell she has bestowed.
A secret affair that will never concede,
must we keep us on the down-low?

Whines of pleasure, sublime, this valentine.
Red wine, and dine. A match kept best discreet.
Must we keep us on the down-low,
a secret affair that will never concede?

A date, with fate, for eighteen hours straight.
Alive, my souls aglow.
A secret affair that will never concede,
Must we keep us on the down-low?

**Both single adults, no families will be broken by this Secret Affair**

Jared Pickett
2/15/2010
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Doris Culverhouse March 31, 2010 at 6:05 AM Must be somebody you work with ;) Would you check out my Desiring Ghazal poem and let me know if it fits the form ok? Thanks for your help.

Doris Culverhouse March 21, 2010 at 12:25 PM don't work too hard!!

Constance La France March 6, 2010 at 9:01 AM What an interesting formatt, and a difficult one, I find. I have actually, given it a try but more than likely did not get it correct. It is a challenge, and I love a challenge and it is really a mind bending experience to write. I am going to keep trying writing this formatt... and eventually perhap, I will get it... thanks so much, for the inspiration... Constance

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen March 2, 2010 at 1:22 AM OK Jared. The format is clear! I guess you must keep it down-low...IF it is to remain a secret. > Broken hearts. Take care, friend. Smiles, Dane Ann

Daniel Cheeseman February 19, 2010 at 11:10 AM Enjoyed this Jared, keep the braincells agitating , regards Daniel

Linda Terrell February 17, 2010 at 11:42 AM Thanks for the nice comment. The design was accidental, as it followed the words intent.

Linda Terrell February 17, 2010 at 11:41 AM Jared I enjoyed reading you random toughts of a secret affair.. I wrote one once called *Two Lives Meet* It is sad when love has to be hidden. But white lies can aid to ones sanity....for some. For the others coming from the down-low into boring reality could be hard on ones mind and heart if it hurts others. Very good keep it up.

Lynette Chachere February 16, 2010 at 8:53 PM This is AMAZING! keep on with your random thoughts. and thank you for your kind words. -Always & Forever Lynette

Marty Owens February 16, 2010 at 8:24 PM Wow...this write looks like it would be so hard...GOOD JOB JARED...enjoyed...Marty

John Freeman February 16, 2010 at 10:22 AM Hi Jared, friend. Well I see they are all wondering why the big secret. For the added excitement, ofcourse! LOL! Sincere, Agape, Moses

Charmaine Chircop February 16, 2010 at 9:26 AM I enjoyed this poem Jared,Im trying to put my brains on the table and think,Why two single adults must live in a Secret Affair?:)..A Secret Affair..Of course there is reason to this secrecy and i wish i could break the code:)lol..Secret love can be passionate and beautiful,but smtimes its so nice to show Love in the open,for all the world to see..:)I enjoy reading you Jared,so keep the pen flowing and all will concede where there is a flicker of Love..Charma:)

Charmaine Chircop February 16, 2010 at 9:26 AM I enjoyed this poem Jared,Im trying to put my brains on the table and think,Why two single adults must live in a Secret Affair?:)..A Secret Affair..Of course there is reason to this secrecy and i wish i could break the code:)lol..Secret love can be passionate and beautiful,but smtimes its so nice to show Love in the open,for all the world to see..:)I enjoy reading you Jared,so keep the pen flowing and all will concede where there is a flicker of Love..Charma:)

Skat A February 16, 2010 at 8:07 AM IF THIERS NO TIES TO ANYONE .WHY KEEP IT AN AFFAIR? IT SOUNDS SO ROMANTI YOUR SECRETCY MAYBE THAT IS THE REASON YOU KEEP AN AFFAIR......IRMA

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 16, 2010 at 7:57 AM A wonderful classy version of a passionate encounter.. my VD was OK .. u didn't see any fireworks from N.J. did u?? my honey bunny could not get down this way so it was e mails and online hugs and kisses... glad yours was much much better... and u already know mine is a Secret Affair in the full sense of these words.... until the "one" comes along ... from my dreamstate to my home state... haha.. luv ya.. "Sweetheart" ..keep that shovel going now... we have 6 more inches and falling here.. yuk!

Sara Kendrick February 15, 2010 at 12:07 PM Well, I don't know about this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. If it is an affair, my advice is to stop. Sara