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Random Thoughts *37* Double Acrostic/ End Line Word

Ferocious winds, sleet turned -------------------- Snow. Another day off of work, poetry -------------------- and Time to shovel my drive. 25 MPH ----------------Winds Hold me hostage in my abode. I ----------------- Keep Enclosed, I rose from slumber. -------------------- Me Rattled, never, I have heat where I'm ------ Contained. Whistling winds whisper in my ear as I'm ------ Shoveling Inches and feet, pierced by icy sleet a ----------- Slushy, Nasty mess. Continuing to fall, no break, the -- Snow Teases me. My third cup of coffee, shaken, ---- Mixed, Encased in a thermos with Amaretto Swiss. ----- Icy Rain, little spears, fierce in these windy ------- Conditions Jared Pickett 2/10/2010 Asavvy1

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Date: 5/21/2010 12:26:00 PM
I like this form I think Dane made it up? anytime I can say more I like it! LOL Winter was just here..now thank God we're warm!
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Date: 3/4/2010 5:23:00 PM
Great job. congratulations on your high win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/2/2010 10:41:00 PM
Jared, this one was quite deserving of its high placement in the contest. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 3/2/2010 8:17:00 PM
Congratulations Jared on your win with this chilly poem :) ...Margaret
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Date: 3/2/2010 1:20:00 PM
All of the 1st three verses are unique and in being so all could have been #1 in my mind! Congrad's! Light & Love
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Date: 3/2/2010 1:12:00 PM
Hey Jared, congratulations on your win in the contest. I've asked Audrey to post these comments on my behalf. ....Jimmy
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Date: 3/2/2010 11:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Dane Ann's contest Jared. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/2/2010 6:13:00 AM
Dear Jared, Sincere Congratulations on YOUR Well Deserved Win in the First Ever " End Line Word " Contest The Acrostic adds a Flavor of Perfection Excellently Done Again Congrats YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 3/2/2010 12:12:00 AM
Synchronized as well, very clever, Jared. Congratulations on your win. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 3/1/2010 7:54:00 PM
how great! what a mix! congrats!
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Date: 3/1/2010 6:34:00 PM
Love this winter theme with the double acrostice. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/1/2010 5:06:00 PM
Very original and creative write, Jared! Congrats on your win in this new form of poetry adding a double acrostic to it. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 3/1/2010 5:03:00 PM
Good job for # 2 Jared. Congratulations on your win. Awesome poem. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/1/2010 4:47:00 PM
Congratulations Jared, for your success in my contest! EVERYONE that participated in the first ever End Line Word poetry form contest deserves drum rolls and kudos! Every entry was wonderful. Picking winners was nearly impossible…but had to be done. Thank you very much for supporting this contest. Poetry Soup poets are super!!! Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/1/2010 4:32:00 PM
Wonderful use of imagery and such a creative use of this form. I can so relate to this poem living here in North Dakota. Congratulations on your well deserved second place in Dane Ann's contest. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 3/1/2010 4:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..beautiful poem...Marty
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Date: 3/1/2010 4:07:00 PM
Great job, Jared!! Congratulations on your win!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 3/1/2010 3:45:00 PM
Hey man.. congrats on your winning poem and placement in the End Line Word contest... guess my advice paid off ..yes?.. good job on the new form my friend... u deserve it..finally...recognition.. luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/1/2010 2:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your recognition in Dane Ann's contest, Jared! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/26/2010 11:00:00 AM
Dear Jared, This is the 4th " End Line Word " POEM that combines Acrostic and all are Well done The Acrostic is about the End Words Excellently Done YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 2/14/2010 7:21:00 AM
Yet another good one, your boy Wilfordjy
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Date: 2/13/2010 11:57:00 AM
Nice one, Jared. Thanks for supporting our efforts to establish this poetic form. I hope you enjoyed writing it. I hope you will enter the contest if you haven't already. I just visited your blog. As a new premium member, I am learning a LOT. I should have found blogs before! They are so much fun...especially pictures...I have put on a ton of them...Again, thank you for writing in the End Line Word form. Sincerely, Dane Ann
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Date: 2/12/2010 12:31:00 AM
Sounds like a difficult winter Jp.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome commnts
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Date: 2/11/2010 4:14:00 PM
Wow an Acrostic and an end line poem...Why didn't I think of this??? lol Very nice Jared...Marty
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Date: 2/11/2010 9:30:00 AM
Cold icy write with a cold uncomfortable end line but then there is the Amaretto Swiss to help the day with poetry soup friends to make it a grand day. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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