Jared Pickett Poet Acrostic

Random Thoughts *37* Double Acrostic/ End Line Word

Ferocious winds, sleet turned -------------------- Snow.
Another day off of work, poetry -------------------- and
Time to shovel my drive. 25 MPH ----------------Winds
Hold me hostage in my abode. I ----------------- Keep
Enclosed, I rose from slumber. -------------------- Me
Rattled, never,  I have heat where I'm ------ Contained.
                                                                   
Whistling winds whisper in my ear as I'm ------ Shoveling
Inches and feet, pierced by icy sleet a ----------- Slushy,
Nasty mess. Continuing to fall, no break, the -- Snow
Teases me. My third cup of coffee, shaken, ---- Mixed, 
Encased in a thermos with Amaretto Swiss. ----- Icy
Rain, little spears, fierce in these windy ------- Conditions


Jared Pickett
2/10/2010
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Debbie Guzzi May 21, 2010 at 12:26 PM I like this form I think Dane made it up? anytime I can say more I like it! LOL Winter was just here..now thank God we're warm!

Joyce Johnson March 4, 2010 at 5:23 PM Great job. congratulations on your high win. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich March 2, 2010 at 10:41 PM Jared, this one was quite deserving of its high placement in the contest. Luv, Andrea

Margaret Foster March 2, 2010 at 8:17 PM Congratulations Jared on your win with this chilly poem :) ...Margaret

Debbie Guzzi March 2, 2010 at 1:20 PM All of the 1st three verses are unique and in being so all could have been #1 in my mind! Congrad's! Light & Love

Jimmy Anderson March 2, 2010 at 1:12 PM Hey Jared, congratulations on your win in the contest. I've asked Audrey to post these comments on my behalf. ....Jimmy

Carol Sunshine Brown March 2, 2010 at 11:02 AM Congratulations on your win in Dane Ann's contest Jared. Love, Carol

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire March 2, 2010 at 6:13 AM Dear Jared, Sincere Congratulations on YOUR Well Deserved Win in the First Ever " End Line Word " Contest The Acrostic adds a Flavor of Perfection Excellently Done Again Congrats YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG

Noel Villarosa March 2, 2010 at 12:12 AM Synchronized as well, very clever, Jared. Congratulations on your win. (^_^) Noel.

Jessica Arteaga March 1, 2010 at 7:54 PM how great! what a mix! congrats!

Laura Spears March 1, 2010 at 6:34 PM Love this winter theme with the double acrostice. Congrats on your win.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix March 1, 2010 at 5:06 PM Very original and creative write, Jared! Congrats on your win in this new form of poetry adding a double acrostic to it. Best wishes, Caroline.

John Freeman March 1, 2010 at 5:03 PM Good job for # 2 Jared. Congratulations on your win. Awesome poem. Agape, Moses

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen March 1, 2010 at 4:47 PM Congratulations Jared, for your success in my contest! EVERYONE that participated in the first ever End Line Word poetry form contest deserves drum rolls and kudos! Every entry was wonderful. Picking winners was nearly impossible…but had to be done. Thank you very much for supporting this contest. Poetry Soup poets are super!!! Lovingly, Dane Ann

March 1, 2010 at 4:32 PM Wonderful use of imagery and such a creative use of this form. I can so relate to this poem living here in North Dakota. Congratulations on your well deserved second place in Dane Ann's contest. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Marty Owens March 1, 2010 at 4:28 PM Congratulations on your win..beautiful poem...Marty

Carrie Richards March 1, 2010 at 4:07 PM Great job, Jared!! Congratulations on your win!! ~ Carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 1, 2010 at 3:45 PM Hey man.. congrats on your winning poem and placement in the End Line Word contest... guess my advice paid off ..yes?.. good job on the new form my friend... u deserve it..finally...recognition.. luv.. "Sweetheart"

Carolyn Devonshire March 1, 2010 at 2:34 PM Congratulations on your recognition in Dane Ann's contest, Jared! Love, Carolyn

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire February 26, 2010 at 11:00 AM Dear Jared, This is the 4th " End Line Word " POEM that combines Acrostic and all are Well done The Acrostic is about the End Words Excellently Done YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG

Wilfordj Yelverton February 14, 2010 at 7:21 AM Yet another good one, your boy Wilfordjy

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen February 13, 2010 at 11:57 AM Nice one, Jared. Thanks for supporting our efforts to establish this poetic form. I hope you enjoyed writing it. I hope you will enter the contest if you haven't already. I just visited your blog. As a new premium member, I am learning a LOT. I should have found blogs before! They are so much fun...especially pictures...I have put on a ton of them...Again, thank you for writing in the End Line Word form. Sincerely, Dane Ann

Brian Strand February 12, 2010 at 12:31 AM Sounds like a difficult winter Jp.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome commnts

Marty Owens February 11, 2010 at 4:14 PM Wow an Acrostic and an end line poem...Why didn't I think of this??? lol Very nice Jared...Marty

Sara Kendrick February 11, 2010 at 9:30 AM Cold icy write with a cold uncomfortable end line but then there is the Amaretto Swiss to help the day with poetry soup friends to make it a grand day. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

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