Random Thoughts *36* the Terza Rima

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Terza Rima

Destination, Jeep:


midnight, my destination
a new eve party,
drunken, lawless fornication.

Sisters of this Sorority, 
dance the night away.
Beer pong is my priority,

after such a busy day.
A sober driver is what my friends need,
I am normal now, and need to stay that way.

It is New Years day and time to go to sleep.
So my final destination is my friends black Jeep.


Jared Pickett
1/16/2010
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
January 18, 2010 at 10:24 AM
nicely done terza rima, interesting poem
Kendrick Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 5:51 AM
Sounds like a terrible way to spend a new year's eve. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Dufresne Avatar
January 16, 2010 at 11:09 AM
Sounds like a dangerous outing! The jeep sounds like temp haven. Good terza rima. Like the sound of it. Never tried one of these. God be with you my friend.-Robert
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