Random Thoughts *35*double Acrostic/Collaboration

**Double Acrostic/Collaboration**

Lawless,  sometimes a bit 
Overbearing. >  Opinionated, close to
Narcissistic. > A cusp baby, the 
Essence of the "Balance."

Wicked, this poetic Warden. I
Offer all the choice. >  self-confident, this
Libra.> you may
Find comfort, hear my voice!!



Jared Pickett
1/10/2010
Asavvy1
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Lingering
Over
Versions of
Eternity

This Acrostic was written by a dear friend of mine.
A man who's confidence level exceeds my own..
"Mr Chocolate Wow".
I know him as:

Samuel Brooks
1/10/2010
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
January 22, 2010 at 4:59 AM
Love does bite just like a wolf, loves evil is wonderfully illustrated in both of these acrostics, great poems!
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
January 13, 2010 at 10:28 AM
Very nice double acrostic, you two.
Sweetheart Avatar
January 12, 2010 at 7:28 PM
The Lone Wolf undisguised... excellent description of u... thankxxx for stating what an inspiration I am to u ... its a gift! that's why I am Poetess Extraordinaire'.. "Sweetheart"
Owens Avatar
January 10, 2010 at 7:43 PM
Wonderful write...Marty
Dufresne Avatar
January 10, 2010 at 3:26 PM
Hey there lone wolf! You do like animals, don't you?! :) This looks a difficult write but you pulled it off and looks like you added a Philosopy lesson from old Socrates . "Know Thyself". Great job, Jared and thanks alot for your welcome comments. God bless!
Haick Avatar
January 10, 2010 at 2:43 PM
Challenging write Jared! Excellent job as usual! Peace, Audrey
Bono Avatar
January 10, 2010 at 2:22 PM
Strange but interesting,I posted a new poem I think you will like.Check it out.
Fraser Avatar
January 10, 2010 at 7:08 AM
Impressive poem Jared >> James
Strand Avatar
January 10, 2010 at 12:16 AM
Very good Jared,not an easy form to handle well.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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