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**Double Acrostic/Collaboration** Lawless, sometimes a bit Overbearing. > Opinionated, close to Narcissistic. > A cusp baby, the Essence of the "Balance." Wicked, this poetic Warden. I Offer all the choice. > self-confident, this Libra.> you may Find comfort, hear my voice!! Jared Pickett 1/10/2010 Asavvy1 ************************************************************* Lingering Over Versions of Eternity This Acrostic was written by a dear friend of mine. A man who's confidence level exceeds my own.. "Mr Chocolate Wow". I know him as: Samuel Brooks 1/10/2010

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Date: 1/22/2010 4:59:00 AM
Love does bite just like a wolf, loves evil is wonderfully illustrated in both of these acrostics, great poems!
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Date: 1/13/2010 10:28:00 AM
Very nice double acrostic, you two.
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Date: 1/12/2010 7:28:00 PM
The Lone Wolf undisguised... excellent description of u... thankxxx for stating what an inspiration I am to u ... its a gift! that's why I am Poetess Extraordinaire'.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 1/10/2010 7:43:00 PM
Wonderful write...Marty
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Date: 1/10/2010 3:26:00 PM
Hey there lone wolf! You do like animals, don't you?! :) This looks a difficult write but you pulled it off and looks like you added a Philosopy lesson from old Socrates . "Know Thyself". Great job, Jared and thanks alot for your welcome comments. God bless!
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Date: 1/10/2010 2:43:00 PM
Challenging write Jared! Excellent job as usual! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 1/10/2010 2:22:00 PM
Strange but interesting,I posted a new poem I think you will like.Check it out.
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Date: 1/10/2010 7:08:00 AM
Impressive poem Jared >> James
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Date: 1/10/2010 12:16:00 AM
Very good Jared,not an easy form to handle well.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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