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Random Thoughts 31 Double Acrostic To Rictameter

Double Acrostic to Rictameter:  The conclusion of my "Image" series

Mit Wobet...

*******Double Acrostic*******


Malicious magician, with a condescending
Intuition> smooth, alluring with 
Tenacious passion.> supremely menacing.

Warden of your soul> life, his
Occupation> dedication in this role> a
Beast wrapped in human flesh, mingling.
Euphoria his weapon, seductive, spine
Tingling, demonic soldier.

*********Rictameter**********
******2,4,6,8,10,8,6,4,2*******

Demon,
hidden inside
complicating the mind.
****of kind, Monica McMichael.
that is when she wakes in the padded room,
breaking free of satans wrinkle.
******alone in real time.
still inside, her
Demon.

*******Free-verse*******

A voice emerges through the silence and gets louder with every second. Little bumps form
on her arms, chills shoot through her spine.. She looks in the mirror only to
find[reflecting back] a handsome man, a
smooth and charming guy..
dressed in black, 
hair slicked back,
wearing a red bow tie...


Jared Pickett
11/10/09
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Mary Meade Stephenson

December 17, 2009 at 10:22 AM

An awesome conclusion to your "Image" series...not exactly what I would have expected but superb nonetheless...held me captive from the beginning to end...masterful job! Thanks so much for sharing...have a great day~Mary

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

November 12, 2009 at 8:22 PM

For Random thoughts, they are surrounding a particular theme in the form of a demonic character. Does the mirror reflects who the person really is here? Or is possession of a confused soul? Thought provoking poem with striking imagery. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your nice comments on my poem. Please read more any time.

Izzy Gumbo

November 12, 2009 at 11:36 AM

you know I read this again and i'm not sure if 'he' is the hidden inside of 'her'... I will read again later also...wonderful images, amazing writing my friend.

Izzy Gumbo

November 12, 2009 at 11:20 AM

wow! dressed in black and hair slicked back, my MiB (Men in Black, movie), has a red bow tie! I love these writes! :) Hugs and thanks for visiting my new stuff, means a lot to me that you enjoy it :)