Random Thoughts *2* a Senryu

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Within me, even in death.
This undying love.

Jared Pickett
9/3/09
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Pickett Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 9:14 AM
I feel the Love...Great write son...Dad
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September 19, 2009 at 6:46 AM
Well written Senyru Jared, your writing amazing me at times, you are definately one of the better writers on here>>James
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September 5, 2009 at 12:45 AM
Amazing senryu, Jared, Words arranged just right to have good effect! Sincerely Moses
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September 4, 2009 at 3:20 PM
Wow! So much depth for a three line poem. I really like the opening line. Keep on writing and sharing your work with us! Karen
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September 4, 2009 at 1:56 PM
Like the idea here. Sara
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September 4, 2009 at 1:43 PM
Excellent senryu nicely penned...Raul
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