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Random Thoughts *2* a Senryu

Imprint embedded Within me, even in death. This undying love. Jared Pickett 9/3/09

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Richard Pickett
Date: 12/3/2009 9:14:00 AM
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I feel the Love...Great write son...Dad
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James Fraser
Date: 9/19/2009 6:46:00 AM
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Well written Senyru Jared, your writing amazing me at times, you are definately one of the better writers on here>>James
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John Freeman
Date: 9/5/2009 12:45:00 AM
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Amazing senryu, Jared, Words arranged just right to have good effect! Sincerely Moses
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Date: 9/4/2009 3:20:00 PM
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Wow! So much depth for a three line poem. I really like the opening line. Keep on writing and sharing your work with us! Karen
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/4/2009 1:56:00 PM
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Like the idea here. Sara
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Raul Moreno
Date: 9/4/2009 1:43:00 PM
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Excellent senryu nicely penned...Raul
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