Random Thoughts *24* a Villanelle

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Heart-Ache



Why does my heart ache?
I am an alright guy
There is only so much I can take!

Often, I sit in seclusion by this lake
Think of my let downs and cry
Why does my heart ache?

I'm always honest, never fake
Occasionally, I'll tell a white lie
There is only so much I can take!

Bad decisions, I am plagued to make
No matter how had I try
Why does my heart ache?

My heart is burning at the stake.
Well done, completely fried.
There is only so much I can take!

Under a weeping willow tree, beside this lake.
Tears weigh heavy, I cry 
Why does my heart ache?
There is only so much I can take!


Jared Pickett
12/23/06
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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October 10, 2009 at 10:27 AM
Kool poem Jared, your a top bloke - and your range of poetry is awesome >> James
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October 9, 2009 at 12:49 PM
please dont cry.... just be you..no white ;lie.. let your heart smile,you re A wonderful friend and good poet-cHARMA
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