Jared Pickett Poet Haiku

Random Thoughts *22* Double Haiku To Double Senryu

Natures fist, such bliss
climb the weeping willow tree!
so inspiring

Natures kiss, wet lips
clouds surround, I imagine.
Poetry firing.



We embrace, she twists
grooving to R&B tones.
Dancing, dry humping.

Her elegant grace,
amazing and entrancing.
Just look at her face...


Jared Pickett
10/3/09
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James Fraser April 27, 2010 at 3:42 PM Superb twinning of Haiku/Senyru Jared. May i say thank you so much for all your comments on my poetry this past year. I wish you all the very best in your writing endeavours >> James

Doris Culverhouse October 8, 2009 at 2:18 PM nicely written

Trudy Diane Rider October 5, 2009 at 10:41 AM wonderfully done Jared! Thank you for sharing this with me. ~Trudy~

Carolyn Devonshire October 4, 2009 at 2:51 PM Way cool write, Jared! Love the imagery. Awesome write! Love, Carolyn

Charmaine Chircop October 4, 2009 at 6:34 AM Bravo,double Haiku,double Senryu,im impressed..."Natures kiss,wet lips",very romantico-xcellent a favs--Charma

Geoffery Mchugh October 4, 2009 at 12:48 AM Groovy, brother.

Raul Moreno October 3, 2009 at 10:35 AM Nice 5/7/5 flow, love the first stanza..the second was very passionate and sensual...Raul

Sara Kendrick October 3, 2009 at 9:54 AM Very passionate write here. I like the first stanza. Keep writing. Sara