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Random Thoughts *22* Double Haiku To Double Senryu

Natures fist, such bliss climb the weeping willow tree! so inspiring Natures kiss, wet lips clouds surround, I imagine. Poetry firing. We embrace, she twists grooving to R&B tones. Dancing, dry humping. Her elegant grace, amazing and entrancing. Just look at her face... Jared Pickett 10/3/09 Asavvy1

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Date: 4/27/2010 3:42:00 PM
Superb twinning of Haiku/Senyru Jared. May i say thank you so much for all your comments on my poetry this past year. I wish you all the very best in your writing endeavours >> James
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Date: 10/8/2009 2:18:00 PM
nicely written
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Date: 10/5/2009 10:41:00 AM
wonderfully done Jared! Thank you for sharing this with me. ~Trudy~
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Date: 10/4/2009 2:51:00 PM
Way cool write, Jared! Love the imagery. Awesome write! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/4/2009 6:34:00 AM
Bravo,double Haiku,double Senryu,im impressed..."Natures kiss,wet lips",very romantico-xcellent a favs--Charma
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Date: 10/4/2009 12:48:00 AM
Groovy, brother.
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Date: 10/3/2009 10:35:00 AM
Nice 5/7/5 flow, love the first stanza..the second was very passionate and sensual...Raul
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Date: 10/3/2009 9:54:00 AM
Very passionate write here. I like the first stanza. Keep writing. Sara
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