Random Thoughts *19* Acrostic 2

The Apple of my Eye
**Quintuple Acrostic**

Tempting me to steal her
Heart. I yearn for her much, yet not
Enough.

Ample 
Positives, no glaring weaknesses.
Peaceful, charming, witty. I'm 
Lusting for her
Embrace.

Olive skin, long toned
Fluorescent legs.

Mischievous with much influence I
Yearn for her much!!!

Enchantingly poetic, the 
Yuppie of my dreams. I feel
Exploited by her charm


This thought inspired by Sara Kendrick.... 
Responding to her comment on my poem:
"Outside Her Window" 

Jared Pickett
9/26/09
Asavvy1
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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December 5, 2009 at 11:04 AM
Nice work, I guess I missed this one, to answer your question. I don't think it makes you a bad person. We all have our reasons. The haiku was about the prayers of oceanic life, thanks for your support...Raul
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October 22, 2009 at 12:15 AM
Great how one inspiration triggers another Jared.Fine work of this difficult form.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
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October 8, 2009 at 2:22 PM
glad to know my mom can inspire you!:) thanks for your comments.
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September 29, 2009 at 4:12 AM
Beautiful poem. This person should be happy to have this compliment. Keep writing. Sara P.S. Glad to have inspired.
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September 27, 2009 at 5:07 PM
"Fluorescent legs" wow I love the phrase! Lucky Sara! Light & Love
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September 27, 2009 at 8:20 AM
Excellent writing, Jared. Keep those fine words flowing. SMILES, Dane
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September 27, 2009 at 1:51 AM
bravo good job very good long acrostic--again the apple of your eye,the same persona of earlier writes,go for her kiddo,well penned--Charma
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September 26, 2009 at 3:07 PM
Absolutely Magnificent... This Acrostic took some real Mind-Making-Moves... Loved It... Going to my Fav's MoonBee
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