Random Thoughts *19* Acrostic 2

The Apple of my Eye
**Quintuple Acrostic**

Tempting me to steal her
Heart. I yearn for her much, yet not
Enough.

Ample 
Positives, no glaring weaknesses.
Peaceful, charming, witty. I'm 
Lusting for her
Embrace.

Olive skin, long toned
Fluorescent legs.

Mischievous with much influence I
Yearn for her much!!!

Enchantingly poetic, the 
Yuppie of my dreams. I feel
Exploited by her charm


This thought inspired by Sara Kendrick.... 
Responding to her comment on my poem:
"Outside Her Window" 

Jared Pickett
9/26/09
Asavvy1

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 12/5/2009 11:04:00 AM
Nice work, I guess I missed this one, to answer your question. I don't think it makes you a bad person. We all have our reasons. The haiku was about the prayers of oceanic life, thanks for your support...Raul
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Date: 10/22/2009 12:15:00 AM
Great how one inspiration triggers another Jared.Fine work of this difficult form.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
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Date: 10/8/2009 2:22:00 PM
glad to know my mom can inspire you!:) thanks for your comments.
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Date: 9/29/2009 4:12:00 AM
Beautiful poem. This person should be happy to have this compliment. Keep writing. Sara P.S. Glad to have inspired.
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Date: 9/27/2009 5:07:00 PM
"Fluorescent legs" wow I love the phrase! Lucky Sara! Light & Love
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Date: 9/27/2009 8:20:00 AM
Excellent writing, Jared. Keep those fine words flowing. SMILES, Dane
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Date: 9/27/2009 1:51:00 AM
bravo good job very good long acrostic--again the apple of your eye,the same persona of earlier writes,go for her kiddo,well penned--Charma
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Date: 9/26/2009 3:07:00 PM
Absolutely Magnificent... This Acrostic took some real Mind-Making-Moves... Loved It... Going to my Fav's MoonBee
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