Jared Pickett Poet Free verse

Random Thoughts *11* a Freestyle Rhyme

My heaven is in your eyes.
the eyes don't lie.
You cannot disguise
how you feel inside
You are my pride
soon you'll be my wife.
There may be mental strife
within the duration of our life.
my sharp, witty tongue slices like a knife.

I must confess
I've loved for a lot less
Stressed but blessed
you've dug deeper than the rest.


Jared Pickett	
9/10/09	
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Moonbee Canady September 21, 2009 at 8:06 PM Very Good Declaration of Your Love... Straightforward and Beautiful MoonBee

John Freeman September 13, 2009 at 6:51 PM An excellent poem Jared, good lines placed together in such a special way, Good read, My friend! Sincerely Moses

Raul Moreno September 11, 2009 at 2:06 PM "my sharp, witty tongue slices like a knife" great line, your free verse is remarkable...Raul

James Marshall Goff September 10, 2009 at 6:42 PM loved this fine write! Jared!...jim

Ali Matheny September 10, 2009 at 11:48 AM AMAZING POEM Jared!