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Random Thoughts *11* a Freestyle Rhyme

My heaven is in your eyes. the eyes don't lie. You cannot disguise how you feel inside You are my pride soon you'll be my wife. There may be mental strife within the duration of our life. my sharp, witty tongue slices like a knife. I must confess I've loved for a lot less Stressed but blessed you've dug deeper than the rest. Jared Pickett 9/10/09 Asavvy1

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Date: 9/21/2009 8:06:00 PM
Very Good Declaration of Your Love... Straightforward and Beautiful MoonBee
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Date: 9/13/2009 6:51:00 PM
An excellent poem Jared, good lines placed together in such a special way, Good read, My friend! Sincerely Moses
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Date: 9/11/2009 2:06:00 PM
"my sharp, witty tongue slices like a knife" great line, your free verse is remarkable...Raul
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Date: 9/10/2009 6:42:00 PM
loved this fine write! Jared!...jim
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Date: 9/10/2009 11:48:00 AM
AMAZING POEM Jared!
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