Random Snapshots of Nature

The soft clip-clop of the horse 
echoed amongst the dark fir trees.
The tall man rode bareback
along the winding path of the forest.

Resting on his leathery gauntlet
sat an alert hawk, listening and watching.
Soon it flew off towards some poor rodent,
His prey for the day.  The man looked up,
Towards the range of high mountains,
Snowcapped but with a creek sliding down 
the side of the verdant valley, and under a bridge.

Soon they arrived at the edge 
of the vast green plateau.  There, birds flew
up and down and whirled beneath the fleecy clouds,
chirping their enchanting, lyrical melodies.
Oh what a sight to behold as the hawk
Returned to his resting place on his arm.

The man slapped his horse’s neck and both flew
towards the far-off calm sea for a rest,
there to meet his love waiting for him.
Such pleasure as they played in the waters
whilst the hawk took a short nap 
on the horse’s back.

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Date: 1/3/2024 5:17:00 PM
Such vivid imagery and such an amazing story, it was so very captivating! I really don't like hawks coming into my back yard and snatching up the birds that come to visit, but your poem made me feel differently, so natural a setting, and such a sweet ending.
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Date: 1/3/2024 2:09:00 AM
Great imagery, as always to your poems, Victor. A beautiful ending to it. Take care...Hugs
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Date: 12/31/2023 5:45:00 PM
you have always been such a wonderful story teller Victor, thanks for sharing this gem:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/27/2023 6:22:00 AM
Nice imagery of the fowler, the bird, and the horse. I enjoyed it dear Victor. :)
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Date: 12/8/2023 10:29:00 PM
Amazing pictures from your superb poetic camera. You have a talent for writing poetry, a gift. Thank you, Victor. Old Duck
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Date: 12/8/2023 3:15:00 PM
Wonderful opener and lovely ending!
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Date: 12/8/2023 2:40:00 PM
Ahh!! I am wondering if the hawk was trained to hunt for the man like a Falcon. I enjoyed reading this one today. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 12/5/2023 10:26:00 AM
Your work is magnificent, Victor. Your imaginative and vividly described narrative is so captivating. Your extraordinary talent for crafting language effortlessly transports the reader to the scene as it evolves in this delightful poem. Stunning imagery,
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Date: 12/3/2023 12:51:00 PM
Wonderful imagery and wonderful poem Victor!! Cuddles….Debx
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Date: 12/3/2023 5:35:00 AM
What a beautiful story. Worth waiting for. Victor you are in fine form, as is this glorious story, every phrase a picture in itself. You created an epic love scene, encompassing the ways of the bird with a fondness for nature and a kinship with your trusty steed. Enjoyed immensely.
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Date: 12/2/2023 11:32:00 PM
Such captivating storytelling dear Victor which really draws the reader in. This delightful poem makes it so easy to visualise the wonderful scene being played out with your great skill of crafted words. Beautiful imagery, ‘ fleecy clouds’ - love that! So enjoyed reading this wonderful, creative piece. Thank you for sharing. Sunday blessings to you. :)
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Date: 12/2/2023 7:38:00 PM
Victor what beautiful words you have written conveying such a medieval or current tale of a man his hunting bird and his horse traveling through the woods to his love. Loved the story line creative and given of wonderful imagery by your words. I have been away but had to return to read your latest lovely piece. God bless you my friend...
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Date: 12/1/2023 6:19:00 AM
A lovely ride for the man on horseback. The man and his horse travelled through enchanting lands. After enjoying the scenery, he on his horse headed to meet his lady love. Beautiful story telling. Is he a hunter with a trained hawk?
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Date: 11/30/2023 11:10:00 PM
enjoyed your ballade, nature is a wonder to share with a horse, a,d friends too, have a sweet day poet
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Date: 11/30/2023 4:00:00 PM
You are very creative, and tell a good story :) hugs
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Date: 11/29/2023 7:42:00 PM
Enjoyable storytelling through poetry Victor, in snapshots of nature too, that gave the reader a bird eye view. Belle
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Date: 11/29/2023 11:56:00 AM
A beautiful poem full of imagery. A nice romantic touch at the end.
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Date: 11/29/2023 6:45:00 AM
- What a wonderful poem, Victor :) - hugs
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Date: 11/28/2023 6:49:00 PM
How are you, sweet poet? What a wonderful narrative! Love the tall man on bareback. We have a museum close by that has cowboy art. Your poem made me think of it. Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 11/28/2023 2:20:00 PM
I greatly enjoyed the idyllic scenes of this captivating tale, especially the one depicted in the final verse. Wonderful storytelling, Victor. :)
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Date: 11/28/2023 7:47:00 AM
Brilliant storytelling throughout this write. I love the flow of your descriptive imagery and the ending too is excellent. Pleasure reading this .
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Date: 11/28/2023 4:20:00 AM
Lovely storytelling Victor.. You set the scene really well and take the reader on a poetic journey and sweet ending to it..
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Date: 11/27/2023 11:41:00 PM
What a great story in your verse Victor, love the imagery and the perfect end to the day. Tom
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