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Reductive and straight face. Rage makes things even worse. Revolting memories. Recalled in a snide way. Ruin a healthy bond. Rough stark uses harsh taunt. Razed venom of racism. Written April 16, 2021 Pleiades R Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kim Merryman

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Susan Ashley

Date: 4/22/2021 7:40:00 PM

Dear Lasaad, your poem is potent in its expression and is a vivid fulfilment of your title. Congratulations for your fine win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/21/2021 12:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your write and picture. We need more love in the world. Have a blessed day...........

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/19/2021 5:00:00 PM

Lasaad, I would have never thought of this word, but you portrayed it well! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Sotto Poet
Date: 4/19/2021 5:47:00 PM

Thanks Kim, I’m glad to win, actually this is my second win in your contest, hopefully I won’t miss any of them in the future, thanks and have a blessed evening

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/19/2021 2:08:00 PM

Hi Lasaad, I’m just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Sotto Poet
Date: 4/19/2021 3:09:00 PM

Oh, Thanks, Alexis; I had no idea it was a win, as you are the only one to have told me this. Appreciate that you are so kind, really. Have a great evening; hugs and regards to you, Alexis

L Milton Hankins

Date: 4/16/2021 11:55:00 AM

Nice one, Lasaad. Certainly a strong contender in the contest. I liked the theme, especially, and how ever "R" word seethes.

Sotto Poet
Date: 4/16/2021 12:13:00 PM

Thanks for reading and commenting, dear Milton, have a nice evening with my best regards.