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Rambling Rose

RAMBLING ROSE Struggling towards the light amongst the weeds and cast-off junk it’s survival a minor miracle in these deprived surroundings the solitary rose bends and twists to find a place to flourish from where did it come? Who planted the seed? does it matter? for it is seen, noticed and admired for its drive to exist amongst a landscape of broken, discarded and unwanted debris it blooms a thing of rare beauty a testament to determination and courage bringing hope, joy, happiness and much needed inspiration so, yes it matters © DilysBrown Ocotber 2013

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Date: 3/1/2014 8:58:00 PM
welcome aboard, dilys.. the words that you put together are beautiful and the result is stunning as a rose in bloom... hope to read more from you.. huggs!
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Date: 2/28/2014 11:27:00 AM
- A beautiful, deep and very well written poem. - A pleasure to read your work, you're good my "new poet friend" Dilys !! - I wish you a pleasant weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/28/2014 9:40:00 AM
Dilys like some people in life they only get noticed when they bloom, I like the format better on this one being to the left, it scans much better.......well done..David
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