Sotto Poet Poet Triolet

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Rambling Muse

You temping muse, wrapped in that shaky sky.
Alluring sapphire hue, a breathless shade
It shows a dusk-toned liminal doorway.
You temping muse, wrapped in that shaky sky.
By dawn, a soft wheeze clad in mute display.
Hold my spirit and thoughts where all invade.
You temping muse, wrapped in that shaky sky.
Alluring sapphire hue, a breathless shade

Written: February 24, 2023

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Vijay Pandit February 25, 2023 at 6:04 AM You temping muse, wrapped in that shaky sky. Alluring sapphire hue, a breathless shade---much delight you convey through your words my friend.

Victor Buhagiar February 25, 2023 at 1:49 AM Your rambling is of the first class.

Joanna Daniel February 24, 2023 at 8:19 PM Lovely triolet, Sotto:) especially the last line:)

Michelle Faulkner February 24, 2023 at 4:52 PM Very vivid, especially 'shaky sky' and 'alluring sapphire hue' - the sky's various colors have inspired me many times~