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You temping muse, wrapped in that shaky sky. Alluring sapphire hue, a breathless shade It shows a dusk-toned liminal doorway. You temping muse, wrapped in that shaky sky. By dawn, a soft wheeze clad in mute display. Hold my spirit and thoughts where all invade. You temping muse, wrapped in that shaky sky. Alluring sapphire hue, a breathless shade
Written: February 24, 2023

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Date: 2/25/2023 6:04:00 AM
You temping muse, wrapped in that shaky sky. Alluring sapphire hue, a breathless shade---much delight you convey through your words my friend.
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Date: 2/25/2023 1:49:00 AM
Your rambling is of the first class.
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Date: 2/24/2023 8:19:00 PM
Lovely triolet, Sotto:) especially the last line:)
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Date: 2/24/2023 4:52:00 PM
Very vivid, especially 'shaky sky' and 'alluring sapphire hue' - the sky's various colors have inspired me many times~
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