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Rambling Birds In Flight

Fluttering wings rise
High viewpoint gentle senses
Float across the sky

Joy and fulfillment
Love, trust, peace and weightlessness
Rushing, gliding wings


For Constance's contest 
Thanks for the inspiration!

Copyright © Doris Culverhouse | Year Posted 2010

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Gert W. Knop Date: 4/1/2010 6:53:00 AM What lovely pictures you painted here, Doris! Enjoyed reading this! Have a great time and keep writing! Gert Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 3/22/2010 5:39:00 AM This is very vivid--enjoyed reading it and great thinking of putting in the word "rambling" in your title ;)--btw thanks for reading my A Soul's Journey, hopefully you read the 2nd part too, thanks :) Login to Reply

Robert A. Dufresne Date: 3/21/2010 4:48:00 AM Wonderful poetic write, Doris! Soup mail-Robert Login to Reply

Linda Witt-King Date: 3/20/2010 10:37:00 PM Oh, this is wonderful Doris. Yes, there must be so much trust as one takes flight and surrenders to weightlessness. Beautiful write. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 3/20/2010 5:22:00 PM I enjoyed reading your poetry and I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with love and inspiration Doris this poem should do well in the contest.. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 3/20/2010 3:23:00 PM Very peaceful and serene feeling I get when I read this! Great job as usual. ...Peace, audrey Login to Reply

Lynette Chachere Date: 3/20/2010 3:02:00 PM Birds are beautiful. but pigeons are not.lol my older sister is so afraid of birds, it is hilarious. -Always&Forever LYnette Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 3/20/2010 9:04:00 AM Terrific Haiku Doris, good luck in Constance's contest >> Soup Mail for you >> James Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 3/20/2010 8:31:00 AM What an uplifting poem, Doris! Surely, this will be a winner in the contest! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Daniel Cheeseman Date: 3/20/2010 7:14:00 AM I saw five Red Kites floating the thermals this morning it was as beautiful as your poem, thanks for the kind words on my work Daniel Login to Reply

Bathsheba Bathsheba Date: 3/20/2010 5:13:00 AM I love the serenity in this write Doris - It carried me away - Thanks for sharing -:) Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/20/2010 5:05:00 AM Oh! To rise on the wings of an eagle and soar with the wind up high,, above life's tribulations and glide...float...sigh... What is a rambing bird? Great write that should do well in the contest...Mom..Jamie found out Thursday that her mother has lung cancer... Login to Reply