Rambling Birds In Flight

Fluttering wings rise
High viewpoint gentle senses
Float across the sky

Joy and fulfillment
Love, trust, peace and weightlessness
Rushing, gliding wings


For Constance's contest 
Thanks for the inspiration!
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Knop Avatar
April 1, 2010 at 6:53 AM
What lovely pictures you painted here, Doris! Enjoyed reading this! Have a great time and keep writing! Gert
K. Avatar
March 22, 2010 at 5:39 AM
This is very vivid--enjoyed reading it and great thinking of putting in the word "rambling" in your title ;)--btw thanks for reading my A Soul's Journey, hopefully you read the 2nd part too, thanks :)
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March 21, 2010 at 4:48 AM
Wonderful poetic write, Doris! Soup mail-Robert
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March 20, 2010 at 10:37 PM
Oh, this is wonderful Doris. Yes, there must be so much trust as one takes flight and surrenders to weightlessness. Beautiful write.
Brown Avatar
March 20, 2010 at 5:22 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry and I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with love and inspiration Doris this poem should do well in the contest.. Love, Carol
Haick Avatar
March 20, 2010 at 3:23 PM
Very peaceful and serene feeling I get when I read this! Great job as usual. ...Peace, audrey
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March 20, 2010 at 3:02 PM
Birds are beautiful. but pigeons are not.lol my older sister is so afraid of birds, it is hilarious. -Always&Forever LYnette
Fraser Avatar
March 20, 2010 at 9:04 AM
Terrific Haiku Doris, good luck in Constance's contest >> Soup Mail for you >> James
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March 20, 2010 at 8:31 AM
What an uplifting poem, Doris! Surely, this will be a winner in the contest! Love, Carolyn
Cheeseman Avatar
March 20, 2010 at 7:14 AM
I saw five Red Kites floating the thermals this morning it was as beautiful as your poem, thanks for the kind words on my work Daniel
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March 20, 2010 at 5:13 AM
I love the serenity in this write Doris - It carried me away - Thanks for sharing -:)
Kendrick Avatar
March 20, 2010 at 5:05 AM
Oh! To rise on the wings of an eagle and soar with the wind up high,, above life's tribulations and glide...float...sigh... What is a rambing bird? Great write that should do well in the contest...Mom..Jamie found out Thursday that her mother has lung cancer...
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