Rambling

how did he become her consciousness?
and why am i speaking in third person?
and why did he catch every raindrop from hitting me before opening this umbrella?
and why am i speaking in third person?
why do I still have this broken umbrella?
and why did he let me ramble on and on..and on and on..?



i jumped on the next flight to L.A.X, looking for answers...
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Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 11:32 PM
Your pen leaves a feeling of questioning, so well done!
Reeves Avatar
November 16, 2025 at 9:55 AM
Thanks!
Lee Sr. Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 4:21 AM
Hi! Chante, this is very, very good love the imaginary. Wonderful verse James
Reeves Avatar
November 16, 2025 at 9:55 AM
Thanks!
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