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Rambling


Rambunctiously I go
Rambling in the dark woods
Randomly following
Range trails made by racoons
Raptly I watch among
Ramps, next to the creek bed
Rationalism leaves

ramps-noun-a wild plant much like spring onions with a garlicy taste

animalpleiades

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Howard Kerr

November 16, 2023 at 6:56 AM

Sara, A vivid landscape has been seamlessly painted in this opulent piece. Magnificent imagery on your part. It’s a credit to your craft.. Howard

Sara Kendrick

November 16, 2023 at 8:04 AM

Why, thank you, Howard. Your visit made my day!! Sara K

Sotto Poet

September 4, 2023 at 1:20 PM

Your poem, Sara, is truly magnificent. The beauty of your words is so vivid that it seems as though your pen emits a radiant glow. The rhythm and harmony of your Pleiades poem are flawless, flowing effortlessly like a gentle stream.

Sara Kendrick

September 5, 2023 at 2:40 AM

I see its glow ran out because I forgot to add the last line. LOL..Thanks for the high praise, Lasaad. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

September 4, 2023 at 10:56 AM

Brilliant Pleiades. Best for a win.

Sara Kendrick

September 4, 2023 at 12:59 PM

Oh, Victor, I don't think I entered this one. LOL..I think I entered another one. Thanks for the visit and wishes. Sara

Heidi Sands

September 4, 2023 at 9:42 AM

Great poem Sara. I enjoyed this :)

Sara Kendrick

September 4, 2023 at 12:58 PM

Why, thank you, Heidi. I like the smile. Sara

The Situation

September 4, 2023 at 9:14 AM

A new style that you used very well here. I'm inspired to give it a try.

Sara Kendrick

September 4, 2023 at 12:58 PM

TS, please do give it a go. You will find it delightful. Your visit is uplifting. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 4, 2023 at 7:35 AM

- Would like to see this picture in the wild ... cute animals ... lovely written, Sara - Best wishes :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick

September 4, 2023 at 12:58 PM

Anne-Lise, that picture does seem like a beautiful spot to visit. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Ink Empress

September 4, 2023 at 7:17 AM

I love this really, the flow is impeccable. And seamless, especially love the line “ rambling in the dark woods “ you’ve done this form so very creatively and effortlessly in sheer eloquence

Ink Empress

September 4, 2023 at 7:25 AM

Yes, it was my first try. You are brilliant

Sara Kendrick

September 4, 2023 at 7:21 AM

Why thank you, Ink Empress. I guess the more one works on a form the easier it becomes. Sara

Jennifer Proxenos

September 4, 2023 at 5:46 AM

iIhave understood from your poems I read Sara my friend that you are a true nature lover. I am too but we go to see animals in their natural surroundings, the bushveld of Africa and WE SEE Elephants, Lions Hyena, kudo bucks, Springboks wild dogs bird life galore and much more. you would love it, and we remain in our car at a safe distance We have secure camps at night. blessings and hugs, Jennifer

Sara Kendrick

September 4, 2023 at 6:54 AM

Jennifer, Yes, I am sure that one of those trips would be wonderful, but even in a vehicle it would be dangerous. I would have really enjoyed it a few years back. Thank for the kind review of my work. Sara