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Rambunctiously I go Rambling in the dark woods Randomly following Range trails made by racoons Raptly I watch among Ramps, next to the creek bed Rationalism leaves
ramps-noun-a wild plant much like spring onions with a garlicy taste

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Date: 11/16/2023 6:56:00 AM
Sara, A vivid landscape has been seamlessly painted in this opulent piece. Magnificent imagery on your part. It’s a credit to your craft.. Howard
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/16/2023 8:04:00 AM
Why, thank you, Howard. Your visit made my day!! Sara K
Date: 9/4/2023 4:20:00 PM
Your pleiades poem is outstanding...it flowed smoothly. What an enjoyable read. And thanks for the information about ramps...wasn't aware. have a great evening. Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/5/2023 2:41:00 AM
Glad that you learned something, Sara. Your visits adds a special touch. Sara
Date: 9/4/2023 1:20:00 PM
Your poem, Sara, is truly magnificent. The beauty of your words is so vivid that it seems as though your pen emits a radiant glow. The rhythm and harmony of your Pleiades poem are flawless, flowing effortlessly like a gentle stream.
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Date: 9/5/2023 2:40:00 AM
I see its glow ran out because I forgot to add the last line. LOL..Thanks for the high praise, Lasaad. Sara
Date: 9/4/2023 10:56:00 AM
Brilliant Pleiades. Best for a win.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/4/2023 12:59:00 PM
Oh, Victor, I don't think I entered this one. LOL..I think I entered another one. Thanks for the visit and wishes. Sara
Date: 9/4/2023 9:42:00 AM
Great poem Sara. I enjoyed this :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/4/2023 12:58:00 PM
Why, thank you, Heidi. I like the smile. Sara
Date: 9/4/2023 9:14:00 AM
A new style that you used very well here. I'm inspired to give it a try.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/4/2023 12:58:00 PM
TS, please do give it a go. You will find it delightful. Your visit is uplifting. Sara
Date: 9/4/2023 7:35:00 AM
- Would like to see this picture in the wild ... cute animals ... lovely written, Sara - Best wishes :) - hugs
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/4/2023 12:58:00 PM
Anne-Lise, that picture does seem like a beautiful spot to visit. Thanks for dropping by. Sara
Date: 9/4/2023 7:17:00 AM
I love this really, the flow is impeccable. And seamless, especially love the line “ rambling in the dark woods “ you’ve done this form so very creatively and effortlessly in sheer eloquence
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Date: 9/4/2023 7:25:00 AM
Yes, it was my first try. You are brilliant
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/4/2023 7:21:00 AM
Why thank you, Ink Empress. I guess the more one works on a form the easier it becomes. Sara
Date: 9/4/2023 5:46:00 AM
iIhave understood from your poems I read Sara my friend that you are a true nature lover. I am too but we go to see animals in their natural surroundings, the bushveld of Africa and WE SEE Elephants, Lions Hyena, kudo bucks, Springboks wild dogs bird life galore and much more. you would love it, and we remain in our car at a safe distance We have secure camps at night. blessings and hugs, Jennifer
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/4/2023 6:54:00 AM
Jennifer, Yes, I am sure that one of those trips would be wonderful, but even in a vehicle it would be dangerous. I would have really enjoyed it a few years back. Thank for the kind review of my work. Sara
Date: 9/4/2023 4:17:00 AM
enjoyed going on this walk with you!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/4/2023 6:48:00 AM
Thank you, Jack. I would enjoy a walk in the woods one more time if only. Sara

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