Ramblers

’Tween hither and thither while wending our way,
skipping, dancing through sand dunes in seascape croquet
and woven in waves watching dolphins at play,
I first tasted her lips in the ocean’s wild spray.

Mystic moonbeams, suffusing clouds’ shimmering sails,
then unleashed us and whisked us down sensuous trails,
soon evoking the trills of untamed nightingales
as our passions pervaded green valleys and dales.

Being specters of splendor in wanton sashay
we mastered our meaning in love’s matinee –
sultry breezes, in passing, slowed down to survey
blazing bodies embracing youth’s blooming bouquet.

With the wind as our wings, chasing rainbows we flew,
two gypsies on junkets through dusk’s residue
sometimes following pollen to everywhere new
beneath the empyrean, painted pale blue.

Rising higher and higher, the sun lured our sleigh,
teasing time was our temptress, night ’n day after day
as we gamboled and gambled, two waifs led astray,
with our shackles afire, our anchors aweigh.

Yes, we’ve drifted, like dreamers where sprites rendezvous
having stars in our eyes with all time as our view,
and feasted on laughter and sipped morning dew
while rambling forever as one made of two.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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November 3, 2015 at 9:55 PM
Terry, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured in the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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December 24, 2012 at 9:09 PM
Terry, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD
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November 16, 2012 at 11:44 AM
I can't go as flesh but my spirit will surely find a way to take part in this exquisite adventure. Such a feast to partake of and I'm always ready to go wherever you take me! Wonderful; luv, Lizzie
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November 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is a very beautiful poem,i love it..Have you ever read James Fraser here on the soup,He writes this type of poetry as well,i think you would like it.Awesome post..going to myfavs..Charma
Kendrick Avatar
November 3, 2012 at 2:00 PM
This one is set apart from most in its excellent quality..I truly enjoyed reading it this afternoon..I am glad that I chose it to read today..Sara
Palmer Avatar
October 31, 2012 at 11:57 AM
wonderful write Terry,loved it
Kearley Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 7:58 PM
Another very fine write here Terry...Love the flow as always.
Burd Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 2:16 PM
love the last line! You took me on a beautiful ride with the Ramblers.
Kiya Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 9:12 AM
very good terry 4 1/2 stars miss seeing your work hope to cacth up with you youve got more new pices up than i do
Horsman Avatar
October 30, 2012 at 7:08 AM
awesome rhyming poem, Terry.. a passionate poem, wriitten with passion, in fact this is bloody good, very good....
Tsiluma Avatar
October 29, 2012 at 1:11 AM
It's interesting how you've titled the poem 'Ramblers', it works well with theme and gives the sense of an ongoing journey through the emotional and physical worlds. Very nicely done Terry!
Gooden Avatar
October 28, 2012 at 10:24 PM
Very descriptive and captures a kind of beauty that's elusive. Good work, Terry.
Murray Avatar
October 28, 2012 at 1:03 PM
Wow terry you had me at first glance. This poems quite literally, flow with such grace and beauty. It swept me off my feet.
Goff Avatar
October 28, 2012 at 12:23 PM
A sweet ride, Terry! Thanks for stopping by...jimbo
Sweetheart Avatar
October 28, 2012 at 7:32 AM
MESMERIZING WORDS OF FANTASTIC EMOTION TERRY .. A GLOWING FLOWING WRITE LUV ..
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October 27, 2012 at 11:41 AM
* I VIEWED THIS BEAUTIFUL LOVE'S WONDERFUL RHYMING VERSE YESTERDAY, SWEET BEAUTIFUL TERRY. YET HAD NOT THE TIME TO LEAVE A MOMENT IN COM UPON ITS LOVELY POETICS STEPS. SOUNDS VERY BEAUTIFUL AND DIVINELY SO. MAKES A HEART WARM WITHIN THESE DREAMS THEIR OWN; THIS BEAUTIFUL LOVE. THANK YOU, FOR YOUR GIFTED LOVING HEART'S KIND VISIT; LOVELY. MY LOVE, RACHEL *
Bauer Avatar
October 26, 2012 at 9:48 AM
if anyone ever criticizes the use of rhyme in a poem (and people do!), i'd love for them to read this masterpiece and i bet it would make them eat their words. wow! i absolutely love this poem! bravo!!!
Ober Avatar
October 26, 2012 at 9:26 AM
A very beautiful write, Terry. Your poem brightened my morning.
Cavanaugh Avatar
October 26, 2012 at 9:00 AM
Wow, another incredible poem Terry. Wonderfully written and captivating. I am always in awe by how masterfully you compose your poems.
Collins Avatar
October 26, 2012 at 8:54 AM
Dear Terry - Well you've done it again. I'm in love once more, swooping and swimming on your flying language. I'm thinking of my late husband and reminded of the thrill of our love. Yay! hugs, Kathy
Brown Avatar
October 26, 2012 at 8:26 AM
Another weekend is here and I have not read as many poems as I would have liked to this week. I am happy I was able to read yours today. Have a wonderful weekend Terry. Hopefully I will be able to read more next week. Love, Carol
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October 26, 2012 at 1:09 AM
Another brilliant piece of art. "And rambled forever as one made of two" . So wise!
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