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Ramblers

’Tween hither and thither we wended our way skipping, dancing through sand dunes, in seascape croquet. While woven in waves watching dolphins at play I first tasted her lips in the ocean’s wild spray. Mystic moonbeams, suffusing clouds’ shimmering sails, unleashed us and whisked us down sensuous trails, soon evoking the trills of untamed nightingales as our passions pervaded green valleys and dales. Being spectres of splendour in wanton sashay we mastered our meaning in love’s matinee – the breezes, in passing, slowed down to survey blazing bodies embraced in youth’s blooming bouquet. With the wind as our wings, till the Never we flew, two gypsies, on junkets through dusk’s residue gently floating like pollen to everywhere new, so eluding pearled teardrops that paint the past blue. Yes, we gamboled and gambled, two waifs led astray, with our shackles afire and anchors aweigh – rising higher and higher, the sun lured our sleigh, teasing time was our temptress, night’n day after day. Having stars in our eyes and all time as our view, we’ve drifted, like dreamers where sprites rendezvous and feasted on laughter and sipped morning dew while rambling forever as one made of two.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/3/2015 9:55:00 PM
Terry, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured in the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 12/24/2012 9:09:00 PM
Terry, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD
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Date: 11/16/2012 11:44:00 AM
I can't go as flesh but my spirit will surely find a way to take part in this exquisite adventure. Such a feast to partake of and I'm always ready to go wherever you take me! Wonderful; luv, Lizzie
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Date: 11/7/2012 12:00:00 AM
This is a very beautiful poem,i love it..Have you ever read James Fraser here on the soup,He writes this type of poetry as well,i think you would like it.Awesome post..going to myfavs..Charma
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Date: 11/3/2012 2:00:00 PM
This one is set apart from most in its excellent quality..I truly enjoyed reading it this afternoon..I am glad that I chose it to read today..Sara
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Date: 10/31/2012 11:57:00 AM
wonderful write Terry,loved it
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Date: 10/30/2012 7:58:00 PM
Another very fine write here Terry...Love the flow as always.
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Date: 10/30/2012 2:16:00 PM
love the last line! You took me on a beautiful ride with the Ramblers.
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Date: 10/30/2012 9:12:00 AM
very good terry 4 1/2 stars miss seeing your work hope to cacth up with you youve got more new pices up than i do
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Date: 10/30/2012 7:08:00 AM
awesome rhyming poem, Terry.. a passionate poem, wriitten with passion, in fact this is bloody good, very good....
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Date: 10/29/2012 1:11:00 AM
It's interesting how you've titled the poem 'Ramblers', it works well with theme and gives the sense of an ongoing journey through the emotional and physical worlds. Very nicely done Terry!
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Date: 10/28/2012 10:24:00 PM
Very descriptive and captures a kind of beauty that's elusive. Good work, Terry.
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Date: 10/28/2012 1:03:00 PM
Wow terry you had me at first glance. This poems quite literally, flow with such grace and beauty. It swept me off my feet.
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Date: 10/28/2012 12:23:00 PM
A sweet ride, Terry! Thanks for stopping by...jimbo
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Date: 10/28/2012 7:32:00 AM
MESMERIZING WORDS OF FANTASTIC EMOTION TERRY .. A GLOWING FLOWING WRITE LUV ..
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Date: 10/27/2012 11:41:00 AM
* I VIEWED THIS BEAUTIFUL LOVE'S WONDERFUL RHYMING VERSE YESTERDAY, SWEET BEAUTIFUL TERRY. YET HAD NOT THE TIME TO LEAVE A MOMENT IN COM UPON ITS LOVELY POETICS STEPS. SOUNDS VERY BEAUTIFUL AND DIVINELY SO. MAKES A HEART WARM WITHIN THESE DREAMS THEIR OWN; THIS BEAUTIFUL LOVE. THANK YOU, FOR YOUR GIFTED LOVING HEART'S KIND VISIT; LOVELY. MY LOVE, RACHEL *
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Date: 10/26/2012 9:48:00 AM
if anyone ever criticizes the use of rhyme in a poem (and people do!), i'd love for them to read this masterpiece and i bet it would make them eat their words. wow! i absolutely love this poem! bravo!!!
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Date: 10/26/2012 9:26:00 AM
A very beautiful write, Terry. Your poem brightened my morning.
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Date: 10/26/2012 9:00:00 AM
Wow, another incredible poem Terry. Wonderfully written and captivating. I am always in awe by how masterfully you compose your poems.
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Date: 10/26/2012 8:54:00 AM
Dear Terry - Well you've done it again. I'm in love once more, swooping and swimming on your flying language. I'm thinking of my late husband and reminded of the thrill of our love. Yay! hugs, Kathy
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Date: 10/26/2012 8:26:00 AM
Another weekend is here and I have not read as many poems as I would have liked to this week. I am happy I was able to read yours today. Have a wonderful weekend Terry. Hopefully I will be able to read more next week. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/26/2012 1:09:00 AM
Another brilliant piece of art. "And rambled forever as one made of two" . So wise!
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