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Ramble

Sweat sticky between eyebrows, deuces wild Like his eyes, those lonesome dove eyes Prairie eyes, ice cool despite the rising heat Choking heat, boiling on a frying pan Round and round those tables, red and black Elbows and anger, shiny greasy metal, Gin bellows and city screams Down home blood lust, home cooked greed Stuffing that money into his collar With two black eyes and a smile
She said he's a rambler, pulling the curtain back
Like a storm blowing this way and that
Mary watched him walk away,
Her heart tucked into the pocket of his white shirt
That gleam in his eye, mama says,
That like a snake, sidewinder,
Bound snatch a man's wallet and warm a girl's blood
Though, she smiled, old and sad, He gotta debt to pay
So you stay clear of the streets, stay clear
Of that trick fool
Copper shined up like gold
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Mr. ramble man,
Shot down today,
They buried him with a blood bouquet
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The cold wind blew out of Rotgut town,
But won't be long, they say,
before another diamond eyed, lonely soul
Will come put his chips on the table

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/9/2014 4:08:00 PM
I typed a comment before Jeremy that the ether absorbed. I just wanted to say your poem was captivating and the words formed just like a side winder going down the page adding another fascinating layer to the poem. So nice to see you back, I have been AWOL also.
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 8/15/2014 3:19:00 AM
Thanks Suzanne. I may go AWOL again, who knows. I can only write and read poetry when inspiration strikes..
Date: 8/8/2014 7:32:00 PM
a story that rambles to its conclusion in a delightful way Jeremy great pen hugs
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 8/15/2014 3:18:00 AM
Thanks, Shadow!
Date: 8/8/2014 3:43:00 PM
Oh I loved [blood bouquet] you really got the ball rolling well! did you try a Blitz poem, do try you'd be great at it! Light & Love
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 8/15/2014 3:18:00 AM
I will definitely give a stab at it, and perhaps draw more blood. Thanks, Debbie
Date: 8/8/2014 1:37:00 PM
love the cryptic appeal of this piece, Jeremy... reminds me of mobsters; amazing!.. huggs
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 8/15/2014 3:17:00 AM
Thank you. I have quite a dangerous side that I need to bring out more often.
Date: 8/8/2014 12:58:00 PM
Glory and struts, dances chances and graves. Great persona of the gambling spirit Jeremy. Xool poem! J.A.B.
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 8/15/2014 3:16:00 AM
Hey, I like your style! Thanks for stopping by.
Date: 8/8/2014 12:08:00 PM
- Jeremy, nice to see you again - A great poem, a pleasure to read :) - Happy weekend !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 8/15/2014 3:16:00 AM
Happy weekend to you, too, Anne Lise
Date: 8/7/2014 10:45:00 PM
Great write Jeremy...very creative...thanks for stopping by....
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 8/15/2014 3:15:00 AM
Thanks, Joseph!
Date: 8/6/2014 7:21:00 PM
I like the style you used here. I was thinking it was that Rotgut contest by the feel of it. Good one. WIsh I could think up something for that contest. Nice seeing you on here again, Jeremy.
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 8/15/2014 3:15:00 AM
Thanks! I'm sure you could have. I should make another 'role playing' contest. Would you enter it--give it a shot ;) ?

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