Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Rhyme

Ram Reincarnated-W

In this life I have seen beauty
With its majesty and cruelty.
I believe in reincarnation doctrine
Would like to be butterfly divine.

A pure beauty of rainbow colors
Not as civilized as men who prefers
To have half of the happiness
And the longevity much in excess.

Would count moments not years
Flirting freely around without fears
Fire is beautiful its beauty kills
Care not if at all its beauty thrills.

Better to burn up for the beauty
Than long bored life without a cutie.  


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Dr. Ram Mehta
Second Place win in:
Contest: If I was an Animal, What Would I be sponsored by Kristen bruni

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Debbie Guzzi May 26, 2011 at 5:14 PM LOL ahhh we long for our mis spent youth! Congrad's Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown May 23, 2011 at 7:28 AM Congratulations on your win in Kristen's contest Dr. Ram. Love, Carol

Jack Horne May 21, 2011 at 12:05 PM Beautiful, Dr Ram. Many conrats on both your wins : )

Dinda Minardi May 21, 2011 at 7:52 AM wonderful, Dr. Ram :) Congratulation.

Emma Buckeridge May 21, 2011 at 3:05 AM Big congrats to you on this big win! x

Andrea Dietrich May 20, 2011 at 9:55 PM congrats on an awesome win with this unique poem, my friend!!

Tahera Mannan May 20, 2011 at 8:39 PM Yes I so agree with you. This is a beautiful write Dr. Ram. Heartiest congrats for this win.

Kash Poet May 20, 2011 at 6:20 PM Congratulations Dr.Mehta on your big win in the contest.Wonderful poem.

Constance La France May 20, 2011 at 5:26 PM Congratulations on you big win, your poem is just divine~

Nette Onclaud May 20, 2011 at 3:13 PM you're a butterfly too like me, dr ram.... big cheers for your high spot.:) huggs

Gwendolen Song May 20, 2011 at 3:00 PM Ha ha on the last line. I love butterflies, doc. The first of the season here in OHio are probably the white sulphurs...they flit and flutter around even when there is frost-yes their beauty thrills. Best to you with this awesome win. Gwendolen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 20, 2011 at 2:09 PM Congrats Dr. Ram on your great win in the animal contest ..an awesome piece my friend.. enjoy second spot..luv..

Carolyn Devonshire May 20, 2011 at 2:06 PM Dear Dr. Ram, so happy to see you placing high in this contest. Well-deserved recognition for a wonderful poem. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Cory Long May 20, 2011 at 1:54 PM butterflies are great, congrats on your win. cory

Michelle Mac Donald May 7, 2011 at 8:35 AM An intriguing write, Dr. Ram. A life by metamorphisis into a beautiful, carefree butterfly. Prompted for me to glance at Rama. I read the tale of Hanuman. It was clever, but not as vibrant as your work. Wishing you and yours the best!! Mikki

Andrea Dietrich May 6, 2011 at 7:17 PM This is really SWEET, Dr. Ram. WHo would have thunk it?? YOu as a butterfly. So original!!

Caroline Cécile Delacroix May 6, 2011 at 6:09 PM Interesting write! Good luck in the contest! Thank you for your kind comments on my poem. Caroline.

Don Johnson May 6, 2011 at 6:03 PM Great verse Dr Ram if flows nicely too like the grub and butterfly do next time i'm a clam :) see you mate Don

Carolyn Devonshire May 6, 2011 at 4:56 PM PS - I think you know I also believe in reincarnation. Adding this to my faves.

Carolyn Devonshire May 6, 2011 at 4:55 PM Bravo, Dr. Ram. Clever approach using reincarnation to introduce your "butterfly" alter ego. The last two lines are priceless! Best wishes in Kristen's contest. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 6, 2011 at 3:04 PM Another superior write Dr. Ram.. and I agree with your first stanza very much luv.. and butterflies are so free and beautiful .. u would be king monarch one... good luck in the contest ..u have soup mail ...