Raking Leaves Verson 1

The leaves have fallen Now its time to rake So the ground canbreath

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Roy Pett

Date: 11/12/2017 5:10:00 AM

A lovely Haiku Darlene, the trees bare their leaves and the temperature drops, we look forward to next spring. :))

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/17/2017 8:05:00 PM

Hello Roy thank you.When winter is here,I count down the days to spring. Have qa nice evening my friend.

DM Babbit

Date: 11/10/2017 1:26:00 PM

So, I too raked and raked again and now with the wind... good mulchings.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/11/2017 7:10:00 AM

Thank you D.M. Babbit. oh the wind does help a bit but sometimes blows the leaves in the wrong place. I hope that you have a nice day my friend.

Alfred Berggren

Date: 11/10/2017 11:14:00 AM

I raked my lawn of leaves the other day. That was a lot of work.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/10/2017 1:19:00 PM

Hello Alfred,yesterday I raked the front lawn, the house before my sister's house has a maple tree, it still has the leaves. It lookes like the front lawn was never raked. Have a nice day my friend.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/9/2017 4:43:00 PM

what a pretty poem Darlene:-) i love this time of year:-) hugs Jan xx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/10/2017 1:22:00 PM

I like the coloured leaves, but how many times do i rake when the maple tree is still shedding leaves? That neighbour should have a pine tree instead of mapleHave a nice day my friend.