Rakhi For My Brother

Rakhi to my brother



No distances can part
no bearing can breach ...

As tender strings of rakhi
I tie on my brother's wrist,
Send heartwarming wishes
to Illuminate those paths,
that we traversed together 
Holding each other's hands.

He reciprocates with a gift
my fav he has always known,
Vows to stand by
In all thick and thin,
His pat on my back 
and caress on head hearten,
Many nostalgic memoirs
recalled to brighten.

You my brother 
I can always count on,
and lean on ...
Words fail me.

Those wonderful years
throughout my life,
spent in fun and pun,
Many blissful moments
some tears shed,
Laughter and scoldings,
Tiring little games
Homework giggles,
lovely vacations together.

Cute hard chases
around in the courtyard,
Climbs of mulberry
amidst beehives,
Winning brought cheers
while losing gave sigh,
Etched in souls
are memories so sweet.

You my brother
Rise and shine,
Wish be the best ...
bubbling as always, 
Sparkle forevermore.


Written August 7, 2017 
For my dear brother Vasu

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 8/9/2017 9:57:00 AM
Upma, when I read this I had to delve deeper into the culture of Raksha Bandhan. What a wonderful ceremony and tribute between brother and sister or even distant relatives. I love the way you wove this into your poem here. I hope your brother appreciates it. By the way, is there a reciprocal ceremony for brother to sister?
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/14/2017 1:35:00 AM
Thank you Dan for your very thoughtful words.. I have added on the third stanza ... missed putting up my brother's side here... thank you for making it complete !
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