Rajanigandha



Rajanigandha – came in pristine dreams
A gardener – so keen - evolved within
Wishes accompanied – eternal stream
‘Was waiting for her, with a Mandolin

She came like a breeze; in my distressed life
And her aroma made me feel delight
Her cute smile played magic – vanished all strife
She brought fountain of joy; my little sprite

She would unfold her petals in the night
Wait until dark when the full moon would come
She would enchant you by her beauty – white;
Spread love allover;  make the bees - all hum

Rajanigandha – my dream would come true
Waiting and watching the firmament – blue

01.09.2016

I dare to write my first sonnet to gift it to my dear daughter on her eighth birthday.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/15/2016 3:29:00 PM
That's some first sonnet. Your daughter should be very proud. :-)
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 9/15/2016 10:31:00 PM
Thanks a lot Tom. Warm regards, Bobby
Date: 9/15/2016 4:28:00 AM
Well done, truly brilliant way to paint this flower in our minds eye.
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 9/15/2016 9:01:00 AM
Thanks a lot Sizwe. Warm regards, Bobby
Date: 9/14/2016 3:29:00 PM
Anindya, what a beautiful poem this is! We call this flower tuberose here in Hawaii, and we make leis from them, as I think you do too. Their scent is heavenly and when I wear a lei it is always what I choose. Congratulations on your wonderful win with this enchanting poem! I loved it! 7 ; )
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 9/14/2016 11:16:00 PM
Yes, it is tuberose. I am very much fond of this flower. Thank you so very much for your loving comments. Hugs, Bobby
Date: 9/14/2016 1:03:00 PM
Back with another congrats on this contest! lovely poem Bobby :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 9/14/2016 11:08:00 PM
Thanks a lot Luloo. Hugs, Bobby
Date: 9/14/2016 12:34:00 PM
what a charming sonnet Bobby many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 9/14/2016 11:08:00 PM
Thank you so much Jan. Hugs, Bobbyxx
Date: 9/13/2016 5:12:00 PM
Your English Sonnet was awesome, creative and unique..Congratulations on your placement..Sara
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 9/13/2016 11:39:00 PM
Your words are even better than my poetry, Sara. You a true motivator and mentor as well. Hugs, Bobby
Date: 9/11/2016 2:04:00 PM
oh how sweet! very amazing tribute to your beautiful daughter! congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 9/11/2016 11:03:00 PM
Thanks a lot Luloo. Hugs, Bobby
Date: 9/10/2016 6:55:00 PM
Anindya, congratulations on your 2nd place win, beautiful written . Hugs Eve
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Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 9/11/2016 3:14:00 AM
Thank you so much, Eve. Hugs back, Bobby
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